That Which Should Not Have Been Discovered · 3:04am Oct 1st, 2012
(Head lying on keyboard) Ugh... this next chapter is eating me up and chewing me out... I'm already late.... Well, maybe I should look through my files for inspiration. I mean, I threw up Millenium when I ran into a writers block with After the Sun...
... Secret of the Alicorns? What's that...?
... (Reads)...
...
OH
I mean... it's not bad... in fact with a little cleaning up it could be a pretty cool story. It's just... um... different. Well, better up this away before...
FOLLOWERS?! Wh-what are you doing here? Oh... this? Well... basically it's an old story I wrote, a reinterpretation of the relationship between Celestia, Luna, and Twilight that I feel hasn't been done before with lots of comedy involved... You want to read it? Um... as a warning... um... it tip-toes into waters where the darkest part of my psyche dwells, a realm that I wish to never unveil unto the mortal world.
Yes I had no qualms with Want Me, Need Me, Love Me and After the Sun.
Yes it's a comedy.
So... what do you guys think? Should I put up what I have for this old story or leave it in the darkest corner of my hard drive, never to bee seen my mortal eyes?
And may Celestia have mercy on my soul either way.
put it up so far i have enjoy all of your work that i have read
Want me need me is an absolute gem! Your writing is phenomenal! I would love to see more of your work
Sounds like fun.
Change the title.
I would be wary of his warnings. I go to college with the guy and believe me: The darkest parts of his mind are not meant to be unveiled. . . Unless it is channeled through Call of Cthulhu at least. Oh well, BRING ON THE DARKNESS, MY MIND IS TOO FAR GONE TO BE BROKEN ANY FURTHER!
Though for the day: "An open mind is like a fortress with its gates unbarred and unguarded."
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Easily done.
The last time I saw that title was on a badly done Alicorn Twilight story.
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Title was a work in progress, can be changed at any moment. Like now.
The Sordid Truth
There, that's much better, don't you think?
Post it. You know you want to...
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Posted, it's now going through the (uncommonly long) approval process. It took nearly 12 hours to get Want Me Need Me Love Me up, who's betting on a full 24?
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You didn't even do a rewrite/edit before posting it? Brave man.
Good luck on the next chapter of the bugfic.
396944 Working on it, gotten to 3,000 words.
And YES, I did edit it. I didn't feel like rewriting the whole thing however so bear in mind I wrote this while still sort-of "amateurish" in my writing style.
For Celestia's sake, I write Fanfiction, how much less amateurish is that?
I went from this story you posted, that is featured atm, to your user page, to here... It must be really original, because I'm reading/tracking WMNMLM, is nice, but it never made me think "oh I shall go see what else this writer've got". I'm all into cool, different ideas, even over writing (unless is completely unreadable), but your writing is great.
If you continue The Sordid Truth, I'll follow you