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Purple Patch


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Mar
2nd
2017

Possessed Pipsqueak · 10:47pm Mar 2nd, 2017

Trailer for my next chapter.
Remember when I said 'Wait till you see what Marephistallion can do?'

Yeah...
'Nuff 'sed, I think.

Comments ( 21 )

Oh my... poor colt, having no control of his actions. Lets the boss battle begin

And as stupid as it sounds, that and the ending is similiar to the dark idea I got with Scotch Tape:twilightblush:

4442007 Really...:rainbowderp:...I hope it's not permanent, whatever it is.

4442016 It's based on this.

Scotch Tape feels great pain, she wants to scream but she can't as her entire body feels numb. Despite the pain and the Numbness, she could faintly hear a voice but the last word cuts off.

"It looks like a... Walks like a... and sees like a...”

4442031 I know. That would be forseen in a dream she has, based on this

Scotch Tape works with her mother Duct Tape in the lower levels of Stable 99 as they're about to enter a corridor

"Scotch Tape, please wait here while I check it out."

Yes, Mommy!"

Her mother enters the corridor. Scotch Tape waits but gets worried after some time passes. Then she hears hoof steps. "Mommy, why did you..." the filly couldn’t finish as she saw her mother. Some kind of cybernetic implants was on the left side of her head, the right fore hoof was replaced with some kind of weapon.

"Kill me..." her mother pleads, Scotch was too shocked to do anything. Then, she managed to put her mother out of her misery.

Didn’t you forgot someone, or something?" a new cybernetic voice was behind her. As she turned around in fear, a pony covered with exo-plating and the same implants as her mother stood before her. She couldn’t even scream as the pony injected her with a pair of flexible needle-like devices. She blacks out.

She came to as the pony spoke, "You wondering what you've feeling? That's pain. Every one of us is part of the whole." Thousands of voices speaking as one filled her mind. "You hear that? Filling your mind, telling you what to think, what to do? Welcome to our collective, Scotch Tape."

The voice orders her to go to the security room. As she opens the door, Blackjack and other security personnel see her. "Oh, Scotch Tape, what have they done?" They fire at her but the bullets have no effect. She and the other pony kill them all with their weapons, including her father and friends

4442032 Sounds intense.
Just remember, don't tell them it's a dream until afterwards.
And I'd definitely go into more detail about putting the mother out of her misery. Not gory detail just for tension and effect. Don't brush it aside, it's a very climactic moment.
Killing one's parent out of mercy is never a simple thing for a any foal.

4442065 Indeed. In this video at 5:20, also got me the idea for it.

And here, it is shown directly how the borg assimilate humans at 0:11 to 0:40 if you can take it.

Of course, it ain't the borg as they not real but someone else

4442065 Now I can't help but think while Pipsqueak has still control that he pleads the doctor for help. Or imagine Dinky being converted and she pleads her father for help:fluttershyouch: For the dream Scotch has, How would you imagine how she looks like as Borg drone and what would be her designation as drone?

4442107 Well, you mentioned the wires acting like tentacles with Morlock.
Maybe even using them as limbs, chasing folks through corridors like some kind of kraken.
Just a thought.

Oh. My. Celestia.

Poor Pip.

I hope there's a way to save him and get him back to normal before all this is over.

4442123 Sounds good. Like evey other drones, she has Exo-plating, should she have a eyepiece? About your idea, as the tubes and wires are seen on the head, one of her forelegs could be replaced with a grapple hook to quickly get from point to point. Got an idea for her borg designation?

4442456 I think an eyepiece would work. Grappling hook too but make seem almost biomechanical, like an extending limb or spinal column. Adds to the scare factor.
No idea about the designation though, I'm afraid. Sorry.

4442464 Still thanks for the help. As the wikia says

Following assimilation, a drone was given a designation appropriate to its function within the collective and position within its unimatrix. For example, the third drone in a group of nine assigned to one particular function may be given the designation "three of nine"

Soon or later I should get up with something
The dark thought is, that the drones that resemble Blackjack, P-21, Morning Glory and Lacunae are actually cyborgs, former US soldiers that got Deadly wounded in battles which is the reason why they act so well and can show emotions

4442464 Of course, they had problems to process what happened to them at first after the "operation" was done. I don't know what youÄre planed but I an imagine that Pipsqueak after freed would have the same problem

4442464 I think you can imagine what happens to Scotch Tape

4442605 Well...I just hope Scotch is okay by the end.

4442619 She will be alright by the end

4442619 If you're wondering why this happens to her, she's hurt pretty bad, close to dying

4442641 Yikes. :fluttershyouch:
Well, I'll read it when I can. I've been a bit preoccupied catching up with things.
Let me know.

4442682 I will, take your time. I hope it won't shock too much you what happens to Scottaloo in her story later on

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