Obsolescence Rewrite is Live

Hello, all. The first chapter of the rewrite of Obsolescence is now live and available on the site. You can find it here.

Illustration by TheOmegaRidley

Comments

[Streamline]

I've not read the original, since I only found it after it was cancelled. I'm going into this one blind. However, I remember liking the premise, so I'm excited.

[Chaotic Dreams]

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Thank you so much, I sincerely hope you like it!

[SIGAWESOME]

Wow. This certainly is a blast from the past. Looking forward to the new and improved hotness!

Does this mean I should remove the old story from my existing "Pining For the Fjords" bookshelf?

[Chaotic Dreams]

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Thank you so much! I sincerely hope you enjoy the rewrite.

As for the old story, that version will definitely not be continuing, but I do hope to preserve what people liked about it in the rewrite. I also hope to follow through on finishing the rewrite.

Thanks again!

[Bahamuttone]

Hmm Just to know... Reading the old one is going to spoil the new one much?

[Chaotic Dreams]

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I don't think it will.

[Starlight Nova]

If the main characters of Obsolescence were voiced, what would they sound like?

[Chaotic Dreams]

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Interesting question, I like it. I imagine them sounding high-pitched and sort of squeaky or scratchy. Imagine Rainbow Dash's voice but without the bravado and confidence, replaced with more of a cynical snark.

[Slavenger Karl]

Hi, I had accidentally left your discord discussion server yesterday. Can you send me a PM with an invite?