Feb
10th
2017
I'm trying something new. · 5:05pm Feb 10th, 2017
So, I've been looking over some of my fanfictions for any errors, since no one seems to want to tell me when there are. And I've decided to try something new with my dialogue. Check out the first half of my A Little Self Therapy story, I've tried something new with the way I type dialogue. Please read it over and tell me what you think. If it gets positive reviewes, I'll write all my future chapters the same way. If I get negative, I'll switch it back to what it was. Try to get as many people to tell me what they think as possible, I want to improve as much as I can.
Hey there. If you want to try something new, I recommend doing it on your new stuff. You should really left your completed projects alone, or else you will just keep changing them over and over, and that is not fun for the readers.
4416813 I understand that, this is just a test to see how others like it.
4416875 For that kind of thing, I suggest getting some proofreaders, instead of just waiting for an ordinary reader to say something. There are groups for that: http://www.fimfiction.net/group/27/the-proofreader-group
4416891 Alright, I will, thanks for referring me. Did you check out my new changes? If so, what did you think.
4416971 I did skim the story again, but it has been a while so, sorry, I didn't notice the differences. The dialogue seemed ok, though.
4416991 I only really added few details and the place of the dialogue, so it may not be that noticeable.