More Machine Than Man Update

On a happier note, let's talk about my latest scheme, More Machine Than Man. I've decided to have it set in a bizzaro version of the Sombra-Verse/Crystal Wars timeline. Here's how things play out in terms of the Mane 6. Fighting for Equestria is Rainbow Dash/Achroma Burst (who I plan on shipping with Starkiller), Applejack, and Pinkie Pie. Oh and Maud Pie and a few others, of course. Meanwhile serving Sombra is Twilight Sparkle (she's also dating Sombra), Fluttershy, and Rarity.

Also, another idea I had was that some other Sith Lords show up, sent by the very entity that turned, well, me into Darth Starkiller, and ally themselves with King Sombra in an attempt to take me down. Oh, and here's the best part: the following are among the Sith I have to fight:

Darth Revan(need to do research into him)

The Dark Apprentice from The Force Unleashed 2 (be interesting to see how Darth Starkiller holds up against one of the most dangerous of adversaries: himself)

Luke Skywalker (in the The Force Unleashed Hoth DLC, which I have for my laptop, Darth Starkiller manages to do what the Emperor failed to do in the canon timeline, and turn Luke to the Dark Side. Matter of fact, in the timeline Darth Starkiller exists in, Luke actually becomes Starkiller's apprentice. So, once again, the last time these two met, Luke was but the learner, now he is the master. Need a good Sith name for him, though. Any ideas?)

And, of course... DARTH VADER!!!

That's all for now. Gotta get back to work on the doc. Leave your thoughts in the comments below!

EDIT: Also, I could use an editor to help make sure this story is the best it can possibly be.