My First Story on Fimfiction!

Hey guys! Just wanted to let everyone know I've finished my first story and it is the debut of my OC Comet Chaser. It took me quite awhile but I finally got it all done, edited, and reviewed. I absolutely could not have done any of it without my girlfriend Forestpip.
The story follows Comet Chaser, a Wonderbolt who works primarily behind the desk rather than in the air. As a member of ROTC I had a heavy Air Force (USAF) influence in my depiction of the Wonderbolts as basically the Equestrian Air Force. All the ranks used are accurate to the real airforce and if anyone is wondering how a Captian can be the superior of a Master Sargent it is because MSgt is an enlisted rank (E-7) while Captian is an officer rank (O-3).
In the story, I also create a new war northeast of Equestria in the Yaket mountains between the Crystal Empire and their former territory, Hooviet Roosia. Obviously, a play on Soviet Russia (BTW as a Russian language student, Roo-ssi-ya is the correct pronunciation of
Россия) the Hooviets follow an ideology similar to that of communism but for them is heavily focused on skill and talent without regard for class or birth. It's all explained in the story, however, I do plan to expand upon this idea in a prequel I've been thinking about writing.
Anyhoo I hope you all check out and enjoy the fanfic, I promise there will be more to come. I'm especially excited for the one I'm writing currently which is "Lawsuits of Equestria" It'll explore what would happen if Equestria used the American court system.