This is going to take a while since I've hardly finished planning the first few scenes in script form. But I have characters and a story so can't be too hard right... Right?
Could someone read through it and tell me what they think? It's rated M due to intense violence later on in the story so make sure view mature is on if you decide to take a look.
The mouth is oddly placed. It looks like it's far above the jaw; almost where the nose would be on a normal person's face.
What's up with his neck? It's extremely long; unless that's intentional I'm gonna go ahead and say that he looks like a miniature giraffe.
4402573 the neck is intentionally long, and thr mouth... You try drawing mamga faces lol
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Still, it should be lower set, as should the nose. I can't draw in the slightest; everything I draw looks like a tumorous whale.
4402579 XD if I put the nose were the mouth is and put the mouth lower doen that'd look so fucking wierd lol
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Well, the mouth should be bigger. Same with the nose.
4402587 lol my sister told me it was the eyes that were the problem ... Yea the mouth is a little off.
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The eyes look passable. I'm with you on the mouth.
Thanks to TVTropes, I've seen... Worse. Much, much worse...
4402592 do I want to know?
4402592... Holy shit
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I KNOW, RIGHT?!
Bigger mouth and get rid of those weird little bubble things at the corner of his mouth. And you should be good!