Total rework of the chapters, the story is tighter, more coherent, and I would like to apologize to the people who read it before this update. I reread all of it and saw so many obvious mistakes, really shoddy work, again really sorry about it, I won't let it happen again.
Chapter 7 of Apple Family Engineer is up. I made some dialogue changes to chapter 6; you don't have to read it, as it doesn't affect the story in any way, but I think it's better than what was there.
So I was supposed to write a chapter today for the engineer story. Unfortunately, I usual have a little something to help get ideas flowing, but I forgot to go buy it last night. So... yeah, tomorrow though, new update. And every day after that until the story is finished. I'm thinking at least 3 more chapters. We'll see.
Portalshy :3
Wow. Is that Windows 7?
I am stuck whit XP and Intel inside centrino.
I envy you.
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Very nice, my thoughts exactly