I'm back · 10:53am Jan 23rd, 2017
As it says above. I wasn't able to really reply or write anything over these past few days since I was away for my sister's wedding. But anyway I'm finally back.
But now I need to just go over some really frustrating comments on Lavender heart.
For one I'm getting alot of complaints about errors and other things that "don't really" make sense. I'd rather you not just assume things like how his mother should be able notice his voice change. I never stated that his voice was deeply masculine or explain it at all, not all guys have deep voices, I've heard some that are almost like a girls.
Another thing to do with chapter 4....STOP PISSING ME OFF ABOUT THE RANDOM CHANGE OF FINDING THE ELEMENTS ON A SHIPWRECK! This is MY story and I can do whatever I wish, I explained that this chapter was more for me to enjoy rather than squarely focus on the plot, but I did throw in the elements so it did. I can and will fix up a chapter that foreshadows him/her finding the elements, but not right now. I'm tried and don't feel like doing anything specific but read some stories I enjoy on here.
That's all from me for now.
Great news, not the pissing off part, I mean your sister's married. Congrats!
4393263 Thanks. In fact you could watch a video on youtube titled "Burswood on swan Jessica and Andrew" It shows a bunch of pictures of them and relatives and friends. Now I shouldn't really tell you but at the 1:00 minute mark a guy sitting on a chair wearing a black shirt and pants...that's me. I'm. not. Joking.
The wedding looked georgeus. I really liked the video. Oh, and how old are you? Because you look around 18 or 19 years old.
4393276 about 5 months away from 18
4393280 I'm only 16
4393283 when do you turn 17?
Third of October
4393286 on my mum's and dad's wedding day.
4393289 Oh cool
4393293 I posted my first story. It should pass moderation in about 5 hours at most. You can check it out if you want :)
4393295 Nice. What's it about?
4393296 It's about a fallen dragon emperor who is going to reclaim his throne and destroy Equestria. And he has magic. That's baisicaly it.
4393299 nice. sounds like it's up my alley
4393302 Great. I only made some sort of introduction but it's still interesting. I have very little time everyday to write stories so it takes me a lot of time just to write one chapter.
4393305 It's pretty much the same with me. I need to fix up some errors on Lavender Heart after my draft was edited by someone tomorrow. I may do another chapter as well, if I can.
4393307 It isn't easy when you also have school. I gotta go. Talk to you later.
4393310 Ok