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whiterook6


Software Developer and amateur writer.

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  • 252 weeks
    Epilogue - Author's Notes

    tl;dr: The color of a Unicorn’s magic is as unique as one of our finger prints. To see a room colored just so would be reassuring to a Unicorn in trouble.

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    The Friendship Express: sometimes I forget just how young the target age is for this show.

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  • 252 weeks
    The Southern Orchard - Author's Notes

    tl;dr: Don’t buck apple trees if you’re tired. You’re liable to pull something.

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    What would it be like to not cast a shadow? Hold your hand up over your face to block the sun. Can you still see the light source? If so, how do you see through your hand? If not, how is the skin immediately around your eyes illuminated? I mean, magic, sure. But how?

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  • 252 weeks
    Mini Guide: Getting Featured

    Getting a story featured is a combination of reader count, likes vs. dislikes, age, and momentum. This means get lots of readers fast, and get them to like and comment. For subsequent chapters, you want the original readers to watch and favorite the story so they’ll be notified right away when you update.

    How to get lots of readers fast:

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  • 254 weeks
    Do not Fuck with Apples - Author's Notes

    tl;dr: There’s a reason there’s only one apple farm in all of Ponyville, and it ain’t because they’re lacking in space or demand.

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  • 256 weeks
    Betrayal - Author's Notes

    tl;dr: HE STOLE IT RIGHT OUT OF HER SADDLEBAGS.

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    I’m nervous. I’m really nervous. Not about Chapter 14 — that’s easy. Slam Dunk. Straight Value. I’m scared because I’m not finished Chapter 15 and I’ve only got a month left. It’s gotta be good. It’s gotta carry its weight. It’s gotta follow Chapter 14 — a tough requirement if ever — and I’m not sure that it does, yet.

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Jan
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2017

Do not Fuck with Apples - Author's Notes · 12:01am Jan 17th, 2017

tl;dr: There’s a reason there’s only one apple farm in all of Ponyville, and it ain’t because they’re lacking in space or demand.

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Whoo boy, this chapter. Ok. So, way back in the day it wasn’t the Tome that took over, but a super evil other villain you’ve already met if you’ve seen any of the show itself. My reviewer pointed out that it was a fucking stupid idea (my words; he was much more diplomatic about it) and I tore it out. It’s still in the deleted scenes I have in my workspace.

Additionally I didn’t have the heroes dealing with Cairo until a couple weeks ago. But there’s no place for real fight scenes after the climax, so a chunk of Chapter 15 was moved into here. That’s why it’s so long. Sorry, reader that wanted shorter chapters!

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> All the pee drained out of her in an instant
FTFY

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I did not get my parent’s permission to go on this feels trip

This chapter makes me cry, if I’m in the right mood. I am unfortunately empathetic to people crying — one of the many reasons I’ll never watch certain comedies like The Note Book — but in this case I’m really proud to bring a grown man to tears (that’s me.)

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They were too tired to get up to any shenanigans on the couch, right? Right?

On that note, would you have enjoyed the story more if I’d put in a little more shipping than just innuendos and very friendly overtures?

I’d considered a moment in the cage, before Midnight and Cairo would return, where AJ and Dash would lament their situation, and through a contrived series of events would wind up only centimeters apart, saying, “It’s not Dash and Applejack. Rock and Daring would do this, right?” AND THEN THEY’D ALL FUCK THE END.

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Please leave a comment letting me know if my overt attempts to give you feels worked.

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The final chapter, titled either The Couch or The Southern Orchard will be posted in two weeks.

With assistance from Daetrin. Cover art by Foxinshadow. Alternate cover art by Diremuffin.

-wr

Comments ( 1 )

Aye.

Do not nose into Apple territory or into Apple business... You are liable to end up "sleeping with the timberwolves".
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