Chapter 3 out, but I forgot the final editing pass. · 7:28pm Sep 29th, 2012
I need to read the printout of it out loud. Rather than unpublish after realizing this mistake, I am leaving it up. Updating with those tweaks should be happening within the next three days.
I also reduced the references to sexuality in Chapter 1 (since this REALLY isn't a clopfic AT ALL) with the help of Warmblood.
EDIT: Real Life slammed me... PROBABLY will have edits in the next few days.