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FiredragonX


Hey, Firedragon here! First time fanfiction mlp writer

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  • 265 weeks
    Doing Commisson

    I’m only doing points on deviantart because I want core membership. Here example of my work:

    -What I can draw-

    Dragons, humans, canines, felines, and background of cities and forest.


    -What I won’t draw-

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  • 270 weeks
    A Fanfic Rec for Valentines Day

    Aww, Valentines Day. Time for a couple to hang out, the time where you ask your crush out on a date, and a time where people cry about being single. Or you like me and don't care about that kind of stuff and just wanted to watch/read your otp. Now in this list I not going to post any horror or fanfic that ends in tragedy. Mostly because of these recommendations are fluffy and sometimes

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  • 274 weeks
    Fanfic review: Fire and Shadow by Rowanoak23

    Today we looked at old Warrior fanfiction by Trinary It's an AU where Firestar doesn't join Tunderclan but instead join Shadowclan. Yes, I know this old and Trinary move on writing MLP fanfiction but it's still hold up. Plus is important to look on author first work and then their newest to see how much they improve.

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  • 323 weeks
    Rogue Crew has been update!

    You can read it here: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9210451/7/Rogue-Crew

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  • 379 weeks
    I need a beat-reader or editor

    I need someone who can edit my fanfiction: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9210451/1/Rogue-Crew

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Dec
26th
2016

Fanfic review: The Lion King Adventures Season 1 · 5:37am Dec 26th, 2016

Today I’m going to review, The Lion King Adventures by ThatPersonYouMightKnow. Now this fanfic is a a bit different from others I review in the past, because the author decide to make the series in five different series or seasons as the author calls them. That takes place in alternate universe. For this review we going to look at series 1 of this series.

So the story doesn’t follow the plot of the movie but the characters are surprisedly in character. But still there wizards, psychopath, and just plain creepy creatures in this universe. So take it what you will.

So yeah this series can get a little dark at times. In fact later one the series it can turn into pure nightmare fuel at times but balance itself with good humor and light-hearted moments as well. But in series one it’s not so bad…until a certain part at the end.

So let’s talk about some good stuff about series one: Simba and Nala do act like their movies counterpart and do act like little kids. Scar really more crazy to his movie counterpart and therefore a more evil and..sometimes more scaredy. The OCs in this are very well written and just fun to read. The author said that was fan of slap-stick humor and it certain shows in his writing because there almost in every story he made. But when the needs to serious or dark it can be really do so.

Bu here the problem with season 1 there a couple of really weird mood whiplash moments in the story. One second we could funny scene and then sudden someone’s throat is ripped out, and it’s not funny. Which I think is the only problem I have with this fanfiction actually.

This one of mine favorite fanfictions but it’s not for everybody. If don’t like fanfic that are dark, weird mood whiplash scenes, or humor that you might not like. But I say give it a shot.

I give a overall A

Check it out and make up your own minds about it.

I’m going to link the first part of season 1 to last part.

Links:

www.fanfiction.net/s/7494476/1
www.fanfiction.net/s/7504435/1
www.fanfiction.net/s/7519935/1
www.fanfiction.net/s/7534088/1
www.fanfiction.net/s/7567704/1
www.fanfiction.net/s/7588072/1
www.fanfiction.net/s/7596912/1
www.fanfiction.net/s/7607812/1
www.fanfiction.net/s/7625059/1
www.fanfiction.net/s/7636583/1
www.fanfiction.net/s/7645099/1
www.fanfiction.net/s/7656776/1
www.fanfiction.net/s/7675031/1

Comments ( 4 )

I think your links got cut off... and you need to put "http://" before them to make em actually act as links :raritywink:

4376853
I test out the links and they work just fine. But thanks for trying to help me. :scootangel:

4377216
No, I mean... they're not clickable links. And they all end on three dots :trixieshiftright:

4377448
Ok I try to fix tomorrow.

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