Review #10 - Wrong Address Bright Eyes, The Winding Northward Road · 3:57pm Dec 6th, 2016
Woohoo, my 10th review... I have two more stories for you guys, and they are:
The Winding Northward Road by Rambling Writer
Wrong Address, Bright Eyes by theworstwriter
The Winding Northward Road by Rambling Writer
(Adventure)
Hayfever's lived in southern Equestria her whole life, never going far from the town in which she was born. But one day, during her midlife crisis, she decides to get out and see the world, traveling to the Crystal Empire alone and on foot. Her journey will take her all across Equestria, opening her eyes to the land she lives in. As she travels, she records her day-to-day adventures in her journal, slowly compiling a travelogue of all sides of Equestria, of big cities and secluded villages, of mountain peaks and river valleys, of ponies friendly and hostile. This is her journal. These are her tales.
Review
A pony goes out on an adventure across Equestria cause why not.
This story has extremely odd pacing because it's written as a journal of a pony. Now the odd part is that it takes only seventy-two days to travel all over Equestria. One nice thing, however, is that it has very few errors in the text. One bad thing, though, is that it does not seem planned out. And it could probably use a "Comedy" tag, but it is not really necessary.
Score: 5/10 Recommendation: Not recommended.
Personal Thoughts: Do not try to read this in one day like I did, as it will leave you very worn out.
Wrong Address, Bright Eyes by theworstwriter
(Comedy)
Some packages are sent to the wrong addresses. What's the worst that could happen?
Review
Rainbow Dash get the wrong package in the mail, making her wonder where hers is. While looking she discovers that everyone else has gotten the wrong package as well.
This story has odd pacing, in that it seems like it NEEDS a sequel. I'm not entirely sure whether that is good or not, but I guess we will find out. One nice thing is that is]t has few errors in it's text. It also seems planned out enough to be hilarious. Furthermore, it's "Comedy" tag fits very well.
Score: 6.75/10 Recommendation: Worth reading.
Personal Thoughts I do wish that we would find out what Rainbow had in her package...
