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Just a critic who happens to write about pastel colored magical talking ponies

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  • 200 weeks
    Signal Boost: Bronycon Bookstore 2019!

    If you’re on this site, you’ve probably wondered about making your super amazing fan fictions into a book that people would actually buy or at least publish something in the next millenium.

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  • 206 weeks
    Leaving for a bit

    If you're reading this, I'm off on a long, long field exercise, for a few months, and I won't be able to answer. Don't worry, I'm not dead. I'll be back as soon as I can.

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  • 230 weeks
    The Rain Recedes

    Well, it's been nearly six months since the last update, but I'm considering shutting down "Tales of the Rainmaker". Someone pointed out a lot of flaws in the story that are too well engrained to fix. Part of me wants to continue, because I want to tell her story, but at the same time, that reviewer was right.

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  • 246 weeks
    My Little Pony: The Movie. A (non)spoiler Review (spoilers after the break)

    I just got done watching The My Little Pony Movie and I was so excited I just had to write this. Okay, so this first bit will be spoiler free, and I’ll leave the spoilery bits below the break.

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  • 254 weeks
    Need a long term editor for "The Secret of Ponyville"

    No, this thing isn't dead. The entire plot is written out in a neat three arc format, I just need to fill in the details. The problem is I'm struggling to get a lot of the scenes to hit just right, and early on I relied heavily on input from Web of Hope as he

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Snowflurry Nightmare art · 1:38pm Dec 6th, 2016

So back in September I went looking for an artist to commission the nightmare scene from The Secret of Ponyville, and it took a while, but I found someone. I was promptly put on a waiting list, and ended up missing the Halloween deadline I'd hoped for (lesson learned, these things take time).

However, three months later, here is the completed art piece of Rarity's nightmare from Chapter 3 of The Secret of Ponyville

link because formatting sucks

Her beautiful white coat was now anything but. Where there was skin left it was black and bubbly and oozing. The exposed flesh beneath was glowing as though lit from within, but it was a frightening red glow, and I could hear it sizzling and popping. Only one of her wings remained, but one could hardly call it that. What was left was a shriveled, blackened section of skin clinging to the tiny bones beneath. Much of the flesh on her face had melted all the way to the bone. I could see most of her teeth, and what was left of her tongue. And her eyes were just... gone. One of them was a deep abyss while the other glowed like a flame. A trail of blood and blackened flesh snaked out behind her, and some waxy substance dripped from her face and down her legs, melting the snow around her hooves as she stepped forward.
I retched on the ground in front of me.

The artist has asked to remain anonymous for personal reasons, but I think they did a great job. What do you think?

Comments ( 2 )

Holy horseapples, that is amazing! :pinkiegasp: Terrifying, but amazing!

Oh, that is nightmarish! :pinkiehappy:

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