Rarity's Road Chapter 3 · 10:24am Nov 29th, 2016
I did end up making some tiny changes like the instances that I used the U.S. system of units. As stupid as this may be, I use metric to avoid the words "foot" and "feet". I also almost changed the ending entirely to include the first part of chapter 4, but felt it was wrapped up nicely where it was.
Anyway, I'm publishing chapter 3 now. Enjoy.
How about some comments, y'all? I'd like to know what those 4 people didn't like about the story.