Bruh.... · 1:40am Nov 21st, 2016
So I have been re reading 'Stuck' lately and, let me just say... bruh. It is SO bad! Seriously, how does this thing have 99 up votes again? The plot is fine, but the execution is just so god damn awful. The dialogue is very messy, the show and not tell aspect isn't super prominent, I'm using parenthesis too often, character interactions are not well executed, I am disappointed in my 17-18 year old self. A 17-18 year old who took HONNORS english his junior year. I thought I was writing a good story to submit to The Pleasant Commentator and Review Group!, but nope! This is bad.
So what to do?
Obvious. Re write and re edit. Don't worry, plot line will stay the same, I'm just gonna improve the story. Thanksgiving break is coming up, so I MAYBE able to get some stuff taken care of.
I'll update you guys every so often on when a chapter or chapters have been redone/edited.
As for the up coming chapter, chapter 30, I'm still not 100% comfortable with it. I wanna at least go through the other chapters and fix them up before I get the new one uploaded.
Thank you guys for continuing to show your support for the story. I really appreciate it, but don't hesitate to point out something that doesn't look correct. I want this to be a good story.
Thanks again guys!
'til next time!
-NickyD
There are always ways to improve on one's writing, do your reaction is pretty natural.
Ironically, you made a mistake in word Honors when talking you have Honors in English.