A thing I don't know has been done before.

So I wrote a thing. I'm unsure if it's been done before (friends and acquaintances say it hasn't) so I'm wondering if I'm the pioneer on this front...

Nevertheless, here's a thing I wrote lately. Feedback and criticism is welcome.

And, as a formality, please refrain from using the 'suggestion' feature in gdocs. It makes the document very difficult to read for others. Comments are fine; but please don't use that feature.

Comments

[Wendy A Crescent]

*Scribbles all over the document because she's a horrible person.*

[Madness Brony]

It's bad and you should feel bad.

[Nadir]

Pretty interested.

[NekroPony]

Hmm, I like the premise. It would be neat to see a equestrian vassle state. Especially if bit of the colonial equestrian government still manage to control and operate independently like the British colonial stayes... likely with interestingly tangled relationships between the natives and the equestrans