A Terribly Serious Contribution to MLP Fandom History · 12:22pm Oct 30th, 2016
(Not dead. Busy. Sorry.)
So, what would you say is the first MLP fanfic?
No.
Hah, no.
No, it's not that either.
No, I submit for your approval, dear readers, that the very first piece of fanfiction was, actually, hidden in the lyrics of a song.
Published in 1982.
Behold from the unfairly overlooked[1] Accept, I give you Princess of the Dawn:
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Just a co-- stop headbanging I'm trying to talk here--a coincidental title? I give you the lyrics:
There's rain on the mountain
A white frost on the moors
It's an epoch of eternity
Waters touch the holy shoreIt's a land of mystery
The world of unseen eyes
You can feel the shadow of a princess
She waits for you insideThe guardians of God play the pawns
Beg for mercy, hail the queen
Princess of the DawnIn the war of the dragons
Young blood ran it's course
They fell to his blade
The knight Iron HorseA forgotten priest
Disappearing in the haze
A chamber of vestal virgins
Twilight is her slaveThe Wizard of Oz moved the pawns
Life for Satan, dust to dust
Princess of the DawnOn the day of the testament
The seventh moon was raging fire
Heaven cried for the sacrifice
The midnight sun was rising higherThe Beauty and the Beast
Lies in her royal crypt
Her kiss is bitter sweet
Death upon her lipsThe Holy Grail held the pawns
Kings and bishops bow to grace
Princess of the DawnThe guardians of God play the pawns
Beg for mercy, hail the queen
Princess of the DawnA new day dawns for heaven and earth
A first sunbeam is killing the night
Once upon a time for ever more
The gloom with the spirit of that Lady in WhitePrincess, Princess, Princess of the Dawn
Princess, Princess, Princess of the Dawn
Princess, Princess, Princess of the Dawn
Princess, Princess, Princess of the Dawn
Firstly, I declare that the history of Equestria must contain a legendary badass named knight Iron Horse. I don't care what Hasbro says, Accept was there first[2].
Secondly, 'Twilight is her slave.' Oh, great, the first fanfic ever was a BDSM Twilestia clopfic.
Typical.
[1] Their new stuff is quite, quite good.
[2] Lauren Faust — Ageless Immortal Stealth Member of Accept? article incoming, everyone.
Sorry, guys, this happens when I'm too damn tired.
Oh, and also: I am much better than I was before regarding my mental state, however, I've fallen so damn far behind on my communication with y'all that I am declaring a message amnesty. If you sent me something and I have not responded, I apologize absolutely, but if you want to see a response, I ask that you send it again. Sorry. I just get a migraine when I look at my inbox.
This is an amazing find.
... also, a BDSM Twilestia clopfic being the very first MLP fanfic comes as no surprise whatsoever.
...So is Celestia Eos or Helios? Serious question.
... Yeah, that works.
Now someone needs to write the actual fic based on the song. (BDSM Twilestia optional. )
Glad to hear you are feeling better!
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Also, glad to hear you're
not a bumblebeefeeling better!Aaaand there go my sides. That aside, I would read the crap out of that fic. For, research purposes. Yes, that's it. Research.
Given the first easily attested Brony appears to be Caligula, it took a surprisingly long time for the clop fanfic to really get started.
These are such stereotypical fantasy metal lyrics.
4277317 was there ever a suggestion he was a bumblebee?
4277222 I would say Eos. Her sister is Selene after all. If it was Helios, being male would imply at some point he became a she. Or is really good at faking being female.
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There is a story like that, you know. :) It's actually quite good, at that.
I... I think you just broke me...
Hill. Larry. Us!
Ideas for Iron Horse:
Lot of interesting places to take it...
Ah, glad to hear that you're doing better. :)
heheheh. Nice to see you back, Ghost.
If this is what we get when you're tired you should be tired more often.
So let's try to piece together this fic. It starts with the traditional weather report and camera sweeping across Equestria ("There's rain on the mountain..."), and then our narrator (Iron Horse?) is called "inside" to the Princess of the Dawn who sends him off to fight "in the war of the dragons." At some point, they "beg for mercy" - let's hope it's after the war, and not before.
Unfortunately, we can't be sure about that, because Celestia turns Nightmare (Supernova?), causes "a forgotten priest" to disappear (since he's forgotten, I guess we don't get to hear who he is either), and forcibly gathers together a chorus of "vestal virgins" to worship herself. Twilight is among them.
A cutscene hints that "The Wizard of Oz" is behind this. Readers will infer this's Discord in a wizard costume, because the chaos from Supernova Sun has given "life for Satan" - i.e. released Discord himself from stone. Though, there's still a sizeable faction holding out for Anon - really, the original Wizard of Oz could easily be argued to be an everyman self-insert.
Celestia's Supernova goes deeper. She causes the sun to remain in the sky at midnight, and she sets the moon on fire. She seizes Discord himself in pretended romance ("The Beauty and the Beast") - but there is "Death upon her lips," for she secretly poisons him. Despite this, she gives him a royal funeral and buries him in "her royal crypt."
All the world is now in her hands - "Kings and bishops bow to grace Princess of the Dawn" - as "a new day dawns for heaven and earth." There shall be no more night; "a first sunbeam is killing the night once upon a time for ever more."
So... that's the fanfic: a tragedy with a Bad Ending as Nightmare Celestia enslaves Twilight, kills Discord, destroys the moon (perhaps with Luna still in it?), and conquers the world.
The End.
Unless Twilight escapes the Vestal Virgins to gather the Elements of Harmony to restore Celestia to herself?
4277472 Could you point me in the direction of this story?
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Here: The Magic World.
It is tagged mature and sex because of some of the subjects it touches upon, mind you, but it isn’t clop.
4277230 yusssssssss! Metal ponies is best ponies!
4277412 what?! Stereotypical metal lyrics? Sounds like we got some HERESY up in here!
On this same general thrust, you cannot convince me that "Freedom Call" from Crystal Empire is not a Fall of the Crystal Empire fanfic in prog metal form, dealing with the heroic and doomed resistance against Sombra (named "Ramses" here...)
...what do you mean, it was released in 2001?
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I think what we're learning here is that time travel will be invented by a brony musician.
Hah, looking through the comments of the Princess of the Dawn video someone made the connection four years ago as well
Of course generating the expected response
Not a bad response though
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It's just all inevitable, isn't it?
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Helios, I'm pretty sure. She doesn't just do mornings, but the whole Sun thing in general.
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I've kept it largely secret, but it has long been my fondest wish to write something unabashedly and preposterously metal. No subtlety, no jokes with footnotes, no shading: just big booming bold colors and people DECLAIMING EVERYTHING IN VAGUELY POETIC AND MODERATELY NONSENSICAL SENTENCES.
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Ponies: Suprisingly Metal
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Surely such a brony would also use their vast powers to, perhaps, insert them into the show, but not as prominent characters? But it's not like there are unaccountably popular musician characters abo...
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THE SCALES FALL FROM MY EYES. TRUTH IS REVEALED.
IT ALL MAKES SENSE.
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Piotr has represented the fandom with distinction. I approve.
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I actually got an idea for a (non-metal-y) story about Iron Horse: The Thousand Lives of Sir Iron Horse. In it, he's a hero of pre-classical Equestria and is revered in several different cultures in several different ways but nobody knows anything at all about the real person, and so the protagonist, a young historian, starts to doubt there ever was an Iron Horse and in trying to piece together some semblance of history they learn something very important about Epona.
After all, what can change the nature of a pony?
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I would weep, if I'd any tears left.
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Princess Luna would approve, I'm sure. Huzzah!
(We need a "Metal Queen of the NIGHT" smiley for Luna...)
4278462 18 weeks later and I want to say this was a fantastic story recommendation. I started it a few hours ago and now I can't stop. Thank you!