I am brazilian, and i love mlp and mlpeg, my favorite charater is Sunset shimmer.
I'm cancelling "A little Sparkling Blaze",Cause, I'm going to do another story,with Adagio ,where she gets pregnant, but this one is going to be sad , when "A little Sparkling Blaze" was comedy.
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A rape comedy that, in all honesty, was poorly executed and rushed beyond reason...
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Honestly, it's GOOD that you're cancelling Blaze. That needs more editors than local universities need to uncuck themselves and get away from political correctness. I could list several other things wrong with Blaze, but I won't give it the time of day since I do believe it had comments that already did that, which then vanished when a new chapter surfaced. Gee, I wonder why.
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Are you kidding? It was a piece of art in the same way that Andrew Dobson's feminist masterpieces are art. Please, we need more this amazing comedy of errors. <3
4478673 Tell OP that, not me. He's the one who cancelled the fic.
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Okay.
OP, your story made me laugh so hard that I got raped by a stranger and now I'm having his baby. He heard me keking and was drawn to the sound like a homing pigeon of vicious patriarchal orgasmic rape. I need more of your story so that I'll know what to do now that I'm massively pregnant with his rape-child. I only have a few chapters before the plot twists start, so please hurry!
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I deleted the story if this makes you happy.
And I understand and respect that you don't like my story, but, do you really have to make me feel like just a piece of crap?
4481381 In my case, yes AND no. Yes because you handled a touchy topic rather... unrealistically (and since this is flippin' rape we're talking about here, someone would've come across it sooner or later and exploded as I did, albeit probably worse since there are harsher critics than I. That and all the other issues the story had... let's put it mildly; any kind of Grammar/Execution [in terms of storytelling ability] Nazis would have grabbed torches and pitchforks.) No, because you have recognized that a problem was present and aptly decided to stop before things went critical.
Either way, there are editors willing to help you. You can reuse the story concept, but the original story would have to undergo a substantial re-write first before you can repost it. Just a tidbit.
4481659 Okay,just ignore it okay?The first story,I might do a rewrite,and I know someone who is willing to help me.
I just exploded in angry because I'm in a down from my bipolar disorder, and I get very sad and angry, sorry.
4481659 Oh and another thing for crying out loud I'm Brazilian English is not my first language.
4478675 And I'm a she not a he
4481984 1) I saw your being Brazilian, hence my suggesting an editor.
2) Bipolar Disorder... that'd explain a lot, as far as your blowing up goes.
3) 'Pologies, didn't see anything 'bout your gender, so I assumed.
4482059 It's okay,and I should apologize,so, sorry,I'm on my period,and on a down,so I can explode a little too easy.
4482440 1) Apology accepted.
2) Please don't announce 'I on the rag' to the internet please. It's... one of those things not everyone on the wide web needs to know, as it's a very personal thing going on with you.
4482465 Yeah I know,I completely lost my mind for announcing it.
And thanks for accepting my apologies.
4483128 De nada~