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whiterook6


Software Developer and amateur writer.

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  • 377 weeks
    Epilogue - Author's Notes

    tl;dr: The color of a Unicorn’s magic is as unique as one of our finger prints. To see a room colored just so would be reassuring to a Unicorn in trouble.

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    The Friendship Express: sometimes I forget just how young the target age is for this show.

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  • 377 weeks
    The Southern Orchard - Author's Notes

    tl;dr: Don’t buck apple trees if you’re tired. You’re liable to pull something.

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    What would it be like to not cast a shadow? Hold your hand up over your face to block the sun. Can you still see the light source? If so, how do you see through your hand? If not, how is the skin immediately around your eyes illuminated? I mean, magic, sure. But how?

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  • 377 weeks
    Mini Guide: Getting Featured

    Getting a story featured is a combination of reader count, likes vs. dislikes, age, and momentum. This means get lots of readers fast, and get them to like and comment. For subsequent chapters, you want the original readers to watch and favorite the story so they’ll be notified right away when you update.

    How to get lots of readers fast:

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  • 379 weeks
    Do not Fuck with Apples - Author's Notes

    tl;dr: There’s a reason there’s only one apple farm in all of Ponyville, and it ain’t because they’re lacking in space or demand.

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  • 381 weeks
    Betrayal - Author's Notes

    tl;dr: HE STOLE IT RIGHT OUT OF HER SADDLEBAGS.

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    I’m nervous. I’m really nervous. Not about Chapter 14 — that’s easy. Slam Dunk. Straight Value. I’m scared because I’m not finished Chapter 15 and I’ve only got a month left. It’s gotta be good. It’s gotta carry its weight. It’s gotta follow Chapter 14 — a tough requirement if ever — and I’m not sure that it does, yet.

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Oct
25th
2016

Bottled Life - Author's Notes · 12:34am Oct 25th, 2016

tl;dr: Twilight, Daring, and Rose are going to become well acquainted with tinnitus as the adventure progresses.

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This movie is basically my inspiration for the Shadow Ponies:

- Corridor Digital, "Brush with Death"

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Looks like our adventurers have a bit of a dilemma ahead of them. But Midnight is neglecting to mention a third option: abandon Midnight with the lantern and use her as a lure, thus making the rest of the city safer.

Midnight Oil is supposed to be the Unicorn Mare from the campsite. But I suppose it doesn't really matter.

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Solifer (n): one who deals in souls. Inspired directly from Fallen London’s Spirifer.

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The Talos was an automaton built to defend Europa in Greece from invaders. It circled the island over and over. Being stuck in such a shell would be torture. And when I say carousel I mean something like what you find in a dry cleaning store. So there's this soul, who totally knows what's going on, but is helpless to stop it. The Metalsmith was a real asshole.

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The next chapter, titled either Sneaking Past or Breaking Through, will be released in two weeks.

With assistance from Daetrin. Cover art by Foxinshadow. Alternate cover art by Diremuffin.

-wr

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