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Zoljen


Just your not so average changeling who attempts to write stories.

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  • 143 weeks
    *cough, hack, wheeze* Too much dust.

    So, Ah, I figure I should make a blog post after... *checks last known date* three years. Dayum. I'm still alive, and if anyone has been reading Calm Wind's Piercing the Heavens, you'd know I was his extra pair of eyes to catch his numerous spelling errors or punctuation gaps.

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  • 297 weeks
    Insert witty title here.

    So, if any of my followers still actually follow me; 1, I'm impressed, 2, They may have noticed some of my stories are now "Cancelled." This is because I am essentially starting fresh. I have been poking at a Fallout story since i have read the one by Kkat (among a few others. Go Murky Number Seven!) and have been inspired to put my Drakeling in that universe.

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    8 comments · 312 views
  • 334 weeks
    Not dead (yet)

    So, I am not dead. I do live! My life has just been full of... well... bleh, really. being a shift lead can really kill ones creative muse for a time. But it is slowly returning! I have plans in store for my stories. Different breed and Embers story, for now, are on the back burner.

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    4 comments · 325 views
  • 354 weeks
    Life.

    I live! If anypony was worried about me, that is. Ahem, my stories are still a work in progress, though I think A different Breed is going to remain on hold for now. I'll find a way to wrap it up or something eventually. Along with Embers story.

    Crystal Changeling remains my current focus, as I do plan on finishing it. Speaking of, enjoy a new chapter!

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    3 comments · 360 views
  • 367 weeks
    Not dead, yet.

    So, Life is a thing. Its a wonderful thing full of life and germs and...stress. More after the break.

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Sep
21st
2016

Is Talon a Mary-sue · 1:21pm Sep 21st, 2016

I saw this on Witching Hour's page and chuckled. Figure'd I'd make one for Talon.

[ ] They are possessed by an angel.
[ ] They are possessed by a demon.
[ ] They are a werewolf//vampire//faerie.
[ ] They are physically strong.
[ ] They have a rare hair//fur color.
[ ] Their eyes are an unusual color.
[ ] This eye color happens to be red.
[ ] Their eyes change color.
[X] They have wings.
[X] They can grow extra body parts//shape shift.
[ ] They are immortal.
[ ] [If female.] They have large boobs.
[ ] [If male.] They are very muscular.
[ ] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
[X] They are telekinetic//pyro kinetic//etc.
[X] They have sixth sense//can mind-read//etc.
[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers.
[ ] They have a special ability//power, but they don't know about it yet.
[ ] They were bestowed//cursed with these powers.
[ ] They are a healer.
[ ] They are from a very rich//royal family.
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich//royal background.
[X] They have lost one//both of their parents.
[ ] They ran away from home.
[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[X] They witnessed one//both of their parent's death.
[X] They are part angel//demon//faerie//some other mythical creature.
[ ] They never knew their parents.
[ ] They were abused//spoiled as a child.
[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender.
[X] They have lots of friends//no friends.
[ ] They are emo//cutesy.
[ ] They look much younger//older than they really are.
[ ] They are currently in a relationship.
[ ] They have lots of morals and declare them a fair bit.
[ ] They have a mental disorder.
[ ] They have an emotional disorder.
[ ] They struggle to stay sane.
[ ] They are a psycho.
[ ] They have multiple personalities.
[ ] They are very intelligent.
[ ] They have hallucinations.
[ ] They can summon spirits//demons//angels etc.
[ ] They have an unusual//unrealistic pet.
[ ] They have a guardian spirit.
[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul.
[ ] Their soul is not the same as them.
[ ] They can talk to spirits//ghosts.
[X] Some part of their body glows.
[ ] They have a rare//unusual name.
[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, etc.
[ ] They have a twin//sibling that they were separated from at birth//a young age.
[X] They are connected with a certain element.
[ ] They are connected with a certain animal.
[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'.
[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime//manga.
[X] They are a race//species that are discriminated against//misunderstood.
[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood//feared.
[ ] They live//lived on the streets at some point in their lives.
[ ] They are hiding from someone//something.
[ ] They have a rare blood type.
[ ] They cry blood.
[ ] Certain noises//smells//situations//etc. make their powers activate//give them a nervous breakdown.
[X] They are from a different country to where they live, a.k.a 'exotic'.
[ ] They are very mysterious//dark.
[ ] They are very lively//happy.
[ ] Their mood changes a lot//very quickly.
[ ] They are very patient.
[ ] They are from a long line of [Magic].
[ ] They have a piece of jewelry//clothing that they always wear.
[ ] They have amnesia.
[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition.
[ ] The have some sort of unbeneficial curse upon them.
[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy.
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'.
[ ] They have insomnia.

Final Score :: 12

RESULT :: 06-15 :: Balanced Character

05 :: Anti-Sue.
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend on, but generally, if they score that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit.

06-15 :: Balanced Character.
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring at the higher end of this category may be a bit too much, though.

16-25 :: Borderline Mary-Sue.
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

26 :: Mary-Sue.
Please revise your character... right now.

Woo, Talon is balanced! Though near the end of the balanced spectrum.

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