Is your character a Mary-Sue? · 12:06pm Sep 21st, 2016
Yep... Doing this just to check on Witching Hour...
[ ] They are possessed by an angel.
[ ] They are possessed by a demon.
[ ] They are a werewolf//vampire//faerie.
[ ] They are physically strong.
[ ] They have a rare hair//fur color.
[ ] Their eyes are an unusual color.
[ ] This eye color happens to be red.
[ ] Their eyes change color.
[X] They have wings.
[ ] They can grow extra body parts//shape shift.
[ ] They are immortal.
[ ] [If female.] They have large boobs.
[ ] [If male.] They are very muscular.
[ ] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
[ ] They are telekinetic//pyro kinetic//etc.
[ ] They have sixth sense//can mind-read//etc.
[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers.
[ ] They have a special ability//power, but they don't know about it yet.
[ ] They were bestowed//cursed with these powers.
[X] They are a healer.
[X] They are from a very rich//royal family.
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich//royal background.
[ ] They have lost one//both of their parents.
[ ] They ran away from home.
[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[ ] They witnessed one//both of their parent's death.
[X] They are part angel//demon//faerie//some other mythical creature.
[ ] They never knew their parents.
[ ] They were abused//spoiled as a child.
[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender.
[ ] They have lots of friends//no friends.
[ ] They are emo//cutesy.
[ ] They look much younger//older than they really are.
[ ] They are currently in a relationship.
[ ] They have lots of morals and declare them a fair bit.
[X] They have a mental disorder.
[ ] They have an emotional disorder.
[ ] They struggle to stay sane.
[ ] They are a psycho.
[ ] They have multiple personalities.
[X] They are very intelligent.
[ ] They have hallucinations.
[ ] They can summon spirits//demons//angels etc.
[ ] They have an unusual//unrealistic pet.
[ ] They have a guardian spirit.
[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul.
[ ] Their soul is not the same as them.
[ ] They can talk to spirits//ghosts.
[X] Some part of their body glows.
[ ] They have a rare//unusual name.
[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, etc.
[ ] They have a twin//sibling that they were separated from at birth//a young age.
[ ] They are connected with a certain element.
[ ] They are connected with a certain animal.
[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'.
[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime//manga.
[ ] They are a race//species that are discriminated against//misunderstood.
[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood//feared.
[ ] They live//lived on the streets at some point in their lives.
[ ] They are hiding from someone//something.
[ ] They have a rare blood type.
[ ] They cry blood.
[X] Certain noises//smells//situations//etc. make their powers activate//give them a nervous breakdown.
[ ] They are from a different country to where they live, a.k.a 'exotic'.
[ ] They are very mysterious//dark.
[ ] They are very lively//happy.
[ ] Their mood changes a lot//very quickly.
[ ] They are very patient.
[ ] They are from a long line of [Magic].
[X] They have a piece of jewelry//clothing that they always wear.
[ ] They have amnesia.
[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition.
[ ] The have some sort of unbeneficial curse upon them.
[X] They are involved in some sort of prophecy.
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'.
[ ] They have insomnia.
Final Score :: 10
RESULT :: 06-15 :: Balanced Character
05 :: Anti-Sue.
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend on, but generally, if they score that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit.
06-15 :: Balanced Character.
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring at the higher end of this category may be a bit too much, though.
16-25 :: Borderline Mary-Sue.
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.
26 :: Mary-Sue.
Please revise your character... right now.
Author Note:
Okay... Good. I'm not anywhere near borderline. 
I would have to say that Harts Fire my OC falls under being Balanced Character the final score 10.
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I realized that technically my OC (Witching Hour) falls under that whole... Mythical creature thing... Also; the whole being equal to alicorns does set off her anxiety attacks...
lets just say that Harts fire has one vary special ability of his own.
he was / is part of the lunar guard but as a Pegasus he should not have any odd magic but his special talent is working with and handling fire.
if you have ever read any of he five score story's you know that lighting dust can handle lighting and massive electric charges.
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Given that I read Calm Wind's Wonderverse, which gives unicorns something like Green Lantern powers with their magic... Yeah... I'm cool with most things as long as there's balance to the character...
Calm Wind's Wonder verse who is that I have know idea.
and if Calm Wind sees this post he will beat me lol .
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Nah... He's a pretty chill guy. Besides, he deals with more annoying people.
Here's his first story -- Soft Spoken With A Big Heart. I have all of them in my favorites.
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I have not read all his story's but several I will put this one on my list.
My OC: Trickshot
You can find my character in Swift Blade 910's story Hope is Dead.
[ ] They are possessed by an angel.
[ ] They are possessed by a demon.
[ ] They are a werewolf//vampire//faerie.
[x] They are physically strong.
[ ] They have a rare hair//fur color.
[x] Their eyes are an unusual color.
[x] This eye color happens to be red.
[ ] Their eyes change color.
[ ] They have wings.
[ ] They can grow extra body parts//shape shift.
[ ] They are immortal.
[ ] [If female.] They have large boobs.
[ ] [If male.] They are very muscular.
[ ] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
[ ] They are telekinetic//pyro kinetic//etc.
[ ] They have sixth sense//can mind-read//etc.
[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers.
[ ] They have a special ability//power, but they don't know about it yet.
[ ] They were bestowed//cursed with these powers.
[ ] They are a healer.
[ ] They are from a very rich//royal family.
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich//royal background.
[x] They have lost one//both of their parents.
[ ] They ran away from home.
[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[x] They witnessed one//both of their parent's death.
[ ] They are part angel//demon//faerie//some other mythical creature.
[ ] They never knew their parents.
[ ] They were abused//spoiled as a child.
[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender.
[ ] They have lots of friends//no friends.
[ ] They are emo//cutesy.
[ ] They look much younger//older than they really are.
[ ] They are currently in a relationship.
[x] They have lots of morals and declare them a fair bit.
[ ] They have a mental disorder.
[ ] They have an emotional disorder.
[ ] They struggle to stay sane.
[ ] They are a psycho.
[ ] They have multiple personalities.
[x] They are very intelligent.
[ ] They have hallucinations.
[ ] They can summon spirits//demons//angels etc.
[ ] They have an unusual//unrealistic pet.
[ ] They have a guardian spirit.
[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul.
[ ] Their soul is not the same as them.
[ ] They can talk to spirits//ghosts.
[x] Some part of their body glows.
[ ] They have a rare//unusual name.
[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, etc.
[ ] They have a twin//sibling that they were separated from at birth//a young age.
[ ] They are connected with a certain element.
[ ] They are connected with a certain animal.
[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'.
[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime//manga.
[ ] They are a race//species that are discriminated against//misunderstood.
[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood//feared.
[ ] They live//lived on the streets at some point in their lives.
[ ] They are hiding from someone//something.
[ ] They have a rare blood type.
[ ] They cry blood.
[ ] Certain noises//smells//situations//etc. make their powers activate//give them a nervous breakdown.
[ ] They are from a different country to where they live, a.k.a 'exotic'.
[ ] They are very mysterious//dark.
[ ] They are very lively//happy.
[ ] Their mood changes a lot//very quickly.
[x] They are very patient.
[ ] They are from a long line of [Magic].
[ ] They have a piece of jewelry//clothing that they always wear.
[ ] They have amnesia.
[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition.
[ ] The have some sort of unbeneficial curse upon them.
[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy.
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'.
[ ] They have insomnia.
Final Score: 10
[ ] They are possessed by an angel.
[ ] They are possessed by a demon.
[ ] They are a werewolf//vampire//faerie.
[ ] They are physically strong.
[ ] They have a rare hair//fur color.
[ ] Their eyes are an unusual color.
[ ] This eye color happens to be red.
[ ] Their eyes change color.
[ ]They have wings.
[ ] They can grow extra body parts//shape shift.
[ ] They are immortal.
[ ] [If female.] They have large boobs.
[ ] [If male.] They are very muscular.
[ ] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
[ ] They are telekinetic//pyro kinetic//etc.
[ ] They have sixth sense//can mind-read//etc.
[x] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers.
[x] They have a special ability//power, but they don't know about it yet.
[ ] They were bestowed//cursed with these powers.
[x]They are a healer.
[ ] They are from a very rich//royal family.
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich//royal background.
[ ] They have lost one//both of their parents.
[ ] They ran away from home.
[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[ ] They witnessed one//both of their parent's death.
[ ] They are part angel//demon//faerie//some other mythical creature.
[ ] They never knew their parents.
[ ] They were abused//spoiled as a child.
[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender.
[ ] They have lots of friends//no friends.
[ ] They are emo//cutesy.
[ ] They look much younger//older than they really are.
[x] They are currently in a relationship.
[ ] They have lots of morals and declare them a fair bit.
[ ]They have a mental disorder.
[ ] They have an emotional disorder.
[ ] They struggle to stay sane.
[ ] They are a psycho.
[ ] They have multiple personalities.
[X] They are very intelligent.
[ ] They have hallucinations.
[ ] They can summon spirits//demons//angels etc.
[ ] They have an unusual//unrealistic pet.
[ ] They have a guardian spirit.
[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul.
[ ] Their soul is not the same as them.
[ ] They can talk to spirits//ghosts.
[X] Some part of their body glows.
[ ] They have a rare//unusual name.
[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, etc.
[ ] They have a twin//sibling that they were separated from at birth//a young age.
[ ] They are connected with a certain element.
[ ] They are connected with a certain animal.
[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'.
[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime//manga.
[ ] They are a race//species that are discriminated against//misunderstood.
[ x] They have a certain power that is misunderstood//feared.
[ ] They live//lived on the streets at some point in their lives.
[ ] They are hiding from someone//something.
[ ] They have a rare blood type.
[ ] They cry blood.
[ ]Certain noises//smells//situations//etc. make their powers activate//give them a nervous breakdown.
[ ] They are from a different country to where they live, a.k.a 'exotic'.
[ ] They are very mysterious//dark.
[ ] They are very lively//happy.
[ ] Their mood changes a lot//very quickly.
[ ] They are very patient.
[ ] They are from a long line of [Magic].
[ ]They have a piece of jewelry//clothing that they always wear.
[ ] They have amnesia.
[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition.
[ ] The have some sort of unbeneficial curse upon them.
[ ]They are involved in some sort of prophecy.
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'.
[x] They have insomnia.
So..... 8? Yeah, normal.