Ooooh Mary Sue test!

Character: Nimbus

1. [ ] They are possessed by an angel.
2. [ ] They are possessed by a demon.
3. [ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie.
4. [] They are physically strong.
5. [ ] They have a rare hair/fur/skin color.
6. [ ] Their eyes are an unusual color.
7. [ ] This eye color happens to be red.(many ponies have red eyes since season 6)
8. [] Their eyes change color
9. [X] They have wings.(Really? …that’s a Mary Sue sin? )
10.[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift.
11.[ ] They are immortal.
12.[ ] [If female.] They have large boobs.
13.[] [If male.] They are very muscular.
14.[X] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
15.[ ] They are pyrokinetic/etc.
16.[] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc.
17.[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers.
18.[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet. (He does know about it! Haha suck it!)
19.[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers.
20.[ ] They are a healer.
21.[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family.
22.[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background.
23.[X] They have lost one/both of their parents. (Technically, no. He was abandoned/foalnapped, but I’ll still sin it.)
24.[X ] They ran away from home. (Yep, there’s a whole fanfic about it.)
25.[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc. (He had the opposite…kinda.)
26.[] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death. (No, he arrived AFTER they died. HAHA SUCK IT AGAIN!)
27.[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature.
29.[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child.
30.[X] They are very attractive to the same gender. (Do changelings count? I’ll still sin it.)
31.[X] They have lots of friends/no friends.(Yep, there’s a second fanfic about it. See what I’m doing here?)
32.[ ] They are emo.
33.[ ] They look much younger/older than they really are. (How would you even tell? Far as I know there’s fillies/colts, then the teens and adults are about the same. Then there’s old as shit.)
35.[ X] They have lots of morals and declare them a fair bit. (I had to think about this one.)
36.[ ] They have a mental disorder.
37.[ ] They have an emotional disorder.
38.[ ] They struggle to stay sane.
39.[ ] They are a psycho.
40.[] They have multiple personalities.
41.[] They are very intelligent. (He was smart as a kid,but now…)
42.[ X] They have hallucinations. (yeah, that’s a thing. It’s in chapter 3)
43.[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
44.[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet.
45.[ ] They have a guardian spirit. (a dead parent, but he’s basically just looks down at him in Equestria and doesn’t do anything)
46.[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul.
47.[ ] Their soul is not the same as them.
48.[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts.
49.[ ] Some part of their body glows.
50.[ ] They have a rare/unusual name.
51.[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, etc.
52.[ X] They have a twin/sibling(s) that they were separated from at birth/a young age. (Celestia’s Sweet Shining ass, for real?!)
53.[ ] They are connected with a certain element.
54.[ ] They are connected with a certain animal.
55.[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'.
56.[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga. (The mane but that changes a lot in the story…)
65.[ ] They are very mysterious/dark.
66.[X ] They are very lively/happy. (What?! Come on…)
67.[ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly.
68.[X] They are very patient.
69.[ ] They are from a long line of assassins.
70.[] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear.
71.[ ] They have amnesia.
72.[ ] The have some sort of harmful curse upon them.
73.[X ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy. (I was wondering when this one would come up.)
74.[ ] They are 'the chosen one'.
75.[] They have insomnia.

Points:12

Take points off your OC's overall score if they fit any of the following statements-

1. [ ] They smoke.
2. [ ] They are an alcoholic.
3. [ ] They are overweight.
4. [ ] They are addicted to drugs.
5. [ ] They have a short temper.
6. [ ] They enjoy bullying others.
7. [ ] They do not care much about others.
8. [ ] They are relatively emotionless.
9. [] They have some sort of permanent medical condition.

Total 12 (damn….)

Your point score:
5: Anti-Sue. Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they score that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit.

6-15: Balanced Character. If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.

16-25: Borderline Mary-Sue. We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

26: Mary-Sue. Please revise your character... NOW.
(Woohoo! Fucking UGH! Get the fuck outta here with that Mary Sue bullshit. Ugh! I feel like singing a musical number now. Now I gotta do Talitha)

• Listening to: Zootopia
• Reading: DC Rebirth: Red Hood and the Outlaws
• Watching: Zootopia (kinda too busy doing this)
• Playing: Ark Scorched Earth
• Eating: Sushi
• Drinking: Butterscotch Beer