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BleedingRaindrops


Just a critic who happens to write about pastel colored magical talking ponies

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  • 295 weeks
    Signal Boost: Bronycon Bookstore 2019!

    If you’re on this site, you’ve probably wondered about making your super amazing fan fictions into a book that people would actually buy or at least publish something in the next millenium.

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  • 301 weeks
    Leaving for a bit

    If you're reading this, I'm off on a long, long field exercise, for a few months, and I won't be able to answer. Don't worry, I'm not dead. I'll be back as soon as I can.

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    The Rain Recedes

    Well, it's been nearly six months since the last update, but I'm considering shutting down "Tales of the Rainmaker". Someone pointed out a lot of flaws in the story that are too well engrained to fix. Part of me wants to continue, because I want to tell her story, but at the same time, that reviewer was right.

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    My Little Pony: The Movie. A (non)spoiler Review (spoilers after the break)

    I just got done watching The My Little Pony Movie and I was so excited I just had to write this. Okay, so this first bit will be spoiler free, and I’ll leave the spoilery bits below the break.

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  • 349 weeks
    Need a long term editor for "The Secret of Ponyville"

    No, this thing isn't dead. The entire plot is written out in a neat three arc format, I just need to fill in the details. The problem is I'm struggling to get a lot of the scenes to hit just right, and early on I relied heavily on input from Web of Hope as he

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Sep
16th
2016

Curse you, canon! · 7:00am Sep 16th, 2016

So I just had a horrifying epiphany

but it's really not all that terrible I just need to brush it off and not worry about it.

So my original plan for the Secret of Ponyville was a story where Rarity holds a tyrannical rule over the citizens of Ponyville, which is actually an ersatz settlement used to hide its own true identity, which is the stage for a performance she broadcasts to the world in order to gain wealth and power. It posed as a sweet innocent town but in truth the characters in her great play were quite miserable and don't enjoy their lives. The story itself is a letter she writes as she realizes she is dying, and comes to a moment of deep regret. I'm avoiding revealing all of the details because I still intend to pursue this route, and I haven't said anything that won't be extremely apparent once I get the story moving.

What I've realized is that this story showed up in canon while I was battling writer's block for it, and I didn't even notice. Starlight Glimmer, in her attempt to be welcomed as an equal member of society, adopted a tyrannical reign over a nearby town which hid its true identity under her rule, posing as a sweet innocent little town in which the citizens are secretly miserable and live in fear of their tyrranical overlord every day. Different motive, but same story, to include the fact that Starlight Glimmer later regretted her decision—although only after much convincing from Twilight.

There are a few details I shouldn't reveal that make it a bit more different, one of which being the power Rarity wields but doesn't understand how to use yet which is granted to her by a three-tailed magical psychic blue fox in a mysterious crystal cave. However, it's still basically the same story and I've just realized that canon has blindsided me again and I really need to work on getting my stories done more quickly.

That said, I am still working on developing the story for The Secret of Ponyville which I totally just revealed the secret. Oops :?. My major stumbling block has been figuring out a way to get Rarity to Ponyville, and stationed there, while developing her character and backstory along the way. She has to be an innocent young filly with morally twisted tendencies who is very confused about her lust for precious items. I've given her a Frienemy in Crystal to help develop and distinguish different parts of her character but I'd still written myself into a bit of a corner and writer's block has had me against the ropes since. I think I might be able to duck out pretty soon here, but I'm taking quite a beating in the meantime, if you'll pardon the American boxing metaphor.

I also do intend to make more of Rainstream but she's actually been quiet while I deal with some personal stuff. Maybe she's sensitive to me, or maybe she went somewhere. She likes to disappear randomly, according to a friend of mine.
Oh? Why does a friend of mine know more about my character than me? He doesn't. But he's declared her his waifu and I may have sent him a plushie I had made of her that was just sitting on my shelf collecting dust. I knew he'd love her better than me, and she liked him too, so I let her go. Anyway, according to him she likes to go off flying for long periods of time and some days he doesn't see her, so maybe Rainstream has simply taken a vacation from my head.

Thanks for reading my ridiculous rant and I hope to have more pony fiction for you to read soon. Also, go check out "Crown of Vengeance" by Mercedes Lackey and James Mallory. Queen Vieliessar Farcarinon, child of the prophecy, fights to claim the unicorn throne in order to unite her people against the darkness that is coming. It's what I'm currently reading and has inspired a few of the things you might see in the upcoming chapter for The Secret of Ponyville. Until next time, enjoy yourselves, and as always, Never Stop Writing.

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