Rewriting

Hey guys, FC_Dracsemi here!

And Switch too. I’m proud to say, this story is getting a Reset.

Yeah, not really a great start, and that last chapter was frustrating...I definitely think we could do better. Don’t you agree?

Yeah, the whole story could be better. I mean, this is a story, not a roleplay. But we’ve treated it like a roleplay since the beginning.

Yeah, not my greatest first start into story writing. We had things move way too fast. Personally, we might want to go with some buildup between baddies, because sometimes, we need a break from fighting for more slice of life or stuff of that ilk. Also, we might be bringing in one of Switch’s friends for editing, proofreading, and general opinion.

I’ll have to ask him when we start the first chapter over, but unless he joins with his character, he might not stick around. He doesn’t like to impose. In the meantime though, we’ve got another story that was actually spawned from a roleplay coming your way!

Yeah, but with less overpowered characters, so no Error!Sans. Actually, if he joins, it might help, since it might make voting for ideas better, since we would have an odd number. Part of the problem was me, since this was my first story, I was always wanting to work on it. Kind of like if I gone Pinkie Pie for a moment.

Comparable to my very first story as well. I wanted to cram so much of what I wanted into it, I forgot what was necessary. But this time, I hope it gets better, and that ratings won’t be stuck in the 50-50 zone.

My rule of thumb for me is if you like the work you did, others will too. I was not proud of this story. I guess part of the problem was lack of communication on my part. That’s all I have to say, anything else you want to say Switch?

I’m done, so this is the conclusion. Equestrian Double Gamble is Dead, but we’ll be bringing you a reborn story from the remains. We’ll be seeing you guys… in the Next Chapter! [...Like what I did with the Markiplier like outro? I might do more things like that… maybe.]