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Random Episode Review of the Day: A Canterlot Wedding · 5:12am Sep 14th, 2012

We’re halfway through the series now, so let’s see what’s next on the docket…

And it’s #49, “A Canterlot Wedding.”

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TECHNICAL SPECS:

Season: 2
Episodes: 51 + 52
Written By: Meghan McCarthy
First Aired: April 21, 2012

SUMMARY:

The Mane 6 are enjoying a nice picnic when Spike comes running up, out of breath from holding in a message from Celestia. The letter speaks of an upcoming wedding, and invites all the ponies to come and help set up the festivities. Fluttershy is placed in charge of the bird choir; Pinkie is tasked with the reception; Applejack is the caterer; Rainbow Dash is asked to perform a Sonic Rainboom; Rarity is chosen to design the dress; and finally, Twilight is in charge of organizing the event. Unfortunately, none of the ponies know anything about the wedding, until Spike hands over the other letter: a wedding invitation to the joining of Princess Mi Amore Cadenza…and Twilight’s big brother, Shining Armor.

Needless to say, Twilight is none too happy with what’s going on. Her brother was pretty much the only friend she had as a filly, and now he’s insensitive enough to notify her about the wedding through an informal invitation rather than an actual letter. Even worse, she has no idea who Princess Mi Amore Cadenza is, and she is NOT giving up her brother to some hussy she doesn’t know. When the six arrive in Canterlot, however, the entire city is encased in a force field, guards are everywhere, and the entire place is on high alert.

Once off the train, Twilight bolts to the castle, where Captain Shining Armor is delegating orders to his subordinates. She angrily tells him off, but he explains that the reason he didn’t tell her was because Canterlot received news of a threat, and the entire city’s been put under lockdown, with Shining providing the shield. As for Mi Amore Cadenza, that’s the formal name for Princess Cadance, Twilight’s old foalsitter who could use love magic. Once she realizes this, Twilight is overjoyed at the prospect of her being part of the family, and even accepts the role of “Best Mare”…until she meets Cadance, who has become a very cold, rude, condescending jerk in the intervening years. She doesn’t even remember their secret hoofshake.

Nonetheless, Twilight tries to keep the wedding going, but she keeps finding more and more evidence of Cadance’s nastiness. Unfortunately, her earlier attitude makes her friends believe that she’s still overreacting, and she runs off to confront Shining about this. However, Cadance soon pulls him into a back room, where she starts using some kind of magic on him that makes his eyes roll around and turn green. Twilight runs back to her friends, but Cadance has just made them her new bridesmaids (after the old ones simply vanished). The next day, during the wedding rehearsal, Twilight barges in and accuses Cadance of doing something to the bridesmaids and using evil magic on her brother. Cadance responds by crying and running away, and Twilight is happy…until she runs into Shining, who gives a logical explanation for everything that’s happened. Upset at his sister’s behavior, he tells her not to bother showing up to the wedding and leaves. Twilight’s friends soon follow, ashamed at what happened, and even Celestia refuses to speak to her. Now alone, Twilight realizes just how much she’s really lost because of her paranoia, and when Cadance suddenly reappears, she tries to make up.

Then she learns she was right all along….just as Cadance causes a ring of fire to appear around her and banishes her to a crystal cavern underneath Canterlot. Cadance’s face keeps appearing on the crystals, taunting Twilight to start shooting off her magic. Finally, one of her shots shatters a crystal wall, revealing a very dirty, half-starved Cadance behind it. Twilight’s ready to strike her down, but stops when she busts out the secret hoofshake, proving herself to be the real Cadance. Together, the two work their way out of the caves, while the wedding seemingly continues without a hitch. In the process, our heroes meet the original bridesmaids, now mind-controlled puppets meant to guard the only way back up to the castle. Fortunately, all it takes is a fake bouquet to send the three tumbling down a shaft, allowing Twilight and Cadance the time they need to get to the hall.

Twilight slams the doors open, causing a collective groan from everypony in the room and evil!Cadance to begin sobbing again…until the real one pops into view a second later. Now cornered, the fake Cadance reveals her true from as Chrysalis, Queen of the Changelings. Her species feeds off of love, so she used the wedding to get inside and drain Shining Armor, reducing him to a mere puppet as well. Without him to power the shield, the other changelings begin chipping away. Celestia finally steps up and engages her in a Kamehameha battle, but the power boost from Shining Armor’s love for Cadance gives Chrysalis just enough extra power to overwhelm even Celestia.

Desperate, the Mane 6 rush off to recover the Elements, but the shield shatters soon after they leave the castle, leaving them awash in Changelings. They manage to fight off an initial horde, but when they get to the vault they see that it’s already been swarmed, and with another horde coming in from behind, they have no way to escape. Celestia is cocooned, Cadance is stuck to the floor, and our heroes have been captured.

While Chrysalis is distracted with her gloating, however, Twilight manages to free Cadance, who uses her magic to break the mind control on Shining Armor. Unfortunately, he’s been so drained that he can’t raise his shield anymore; that is, until Cadance uses her love magic to power him back up. Together, their power creates a new force field, pushing out Chrysalis and the Changelings and scattering them from one end of Equestria to the other. With the day saved, Celestia (and presumably, the others) apologize for letting their focus on the wedding prevent them from seeing what was really going on.

The actual wedding planning resumes, and this Cadance soon proves to be a much nicer pony. Twilight is back to Best Mare, Shining Armor and Cadance are married, and Dash gets to perform her Sonic Rainboom. During the reception, Twilight sings off a final song congratulating the two, and finally hugs her brother goodbye as he goes to start his new family. Rarity catches the bouquet (only to give it up to the bridesmaids), and everypony celebrates a great wedding.

Oh, and Luna gets three lines. Huzzah.

REVIEW:

If “Luna Eclipsed” was the episode fans knew would tear the fandom apart, “A Canterlot Wedding” was the curveball that sent many screaming back to the bunkers. And honestly, if you looked at the premise alone and didn’t include who’s making the show and all their previous accomplishments into the equation, this would sound like a disaster. Not only was it a blatant grab at 2011’s royal wedding extravaganza, but it gave Twilight a hitherto non-existent brother, introduced a new Alicorn princess, and every preview centered itself around the episode being an obnoxious combination of everything girly and feminine to have ever existed. And while the episode does have its flaws, for the most part it actually turned out surprisingly well.

The opening picnic scene is a pretty good intro for the upcoming events of the episode. Some of the bits are cute, like Pinkie stomping on the cake (and Twilight quickly fixing it) and Rarity swooning over the idea of designing for a Canterlot wedding. Twilight’s shock at the end was also a funny touch, and perfectly mirrored the reaction of those watching that had managed to avoid all the spoilers.

Before we go on, we need to address Shining Armor’s status in the series and effect on the canon and fanon. Technically, nobody ever said Twilight was an only foal. In addition, there is no rule saying that siblings and family members cannot be added in out of nowhere, nor is there a law that says that Twilight had to mention Shining Armor every time she opened her mouth. Sweetie Belle’s relation to Rarity was also introduced out of nowhere at the start of an episode, after all. The problem with Shining Armor, though, was that he’s not only Twilight’s BBBFF, but he’s the Captain of the Guard and her only friend from her foalhood days. This makes his sudden addition feel more than a little frustrating, and he really should have made at least a background appearance or two earlier in the season.

Still, the rest of the scene is nice. Twilight making the sandwich talk was hilarious. Rarity swooning again was enjoyable as well. Applejack’s reaction to Twilight’s frustrations are nice, given the close relationship she enjoys with her family. And then there’s the episode’s first song, “Big Brother Best Friend Forever.”

Of the three, this is my least favorite, but it’s still a pretty good song, and I always enjoy seeing filly Twilight being adorable. The song also establishes how close the two are, and will have an impact later on in the episode.

The train scene is mostly establishing some more exposition. Spike running the bachelor party is funny, but I do have to ask who thought giving the job of setting up a night of debauchery and sin to a ten-year-old. (Really, it’s just here to throw the brick.) The more important parts, however, are Twilight revealing that the two have been drifting apart since she moved to Ponyville, and the force field around Canterlot. (You can actually see if during the picnic scene, which is a nice bit of continuity.)

The first meeting between the two is, again, there to advance the backstory, but also shows just how pissed Twilight is at Shining Armor. We not only learn a new swear (“For pony’s sake!”), but we also hear Shining Armor’s voice for the first time, as voiced by the same guy who did Braeburn. And...I can’t say I’m a fan. Mind you, he isn’t a booming, hammy kind of soldier many would expect for his position, but he sounds less like a soldier and more like he should be on a beach in California. We also see his ability to create forcefields, which we’ve also seen Twilight do on a smaller scale in “Return of Harmony” and “Ponyville Confidential.” Given Twilight’s ability to quickly learn magic, it’s understandable how she’d learn to copy his talents.

She calms down, though, once she learns that his bride-to-be is Princess Cadance, Twilight’s old foalsitter. And thus we get to the other half of the gruesome twosome for fanfiction writers. There’s no way to get around it, so let’s discuss it right now. When Faust pitched the original story, Cadance was a regular Unicorn, a la Prince Blueblood. But when Hasbro approved the white Celestia toy to replace the pink one, she was changed to an Alicorn so they could still market a pink doll to concerned retailers. This pretty much dropped a massive meteor on much of the long-established fanon, and many called foul since Faust wanted Celestia and Luna to be the only Alicorns. Still, no actual canon established this, so the show didn’t violate anything with her inclusion.

The flashback also establishes that Cadance really was her foalsitter, which is somewhat odd. Since Twilight had no Cutie Mark in the flashback, it would imply that either the animators made a mistake, or Twilight’s parents had some serious pull to make that work. (Personally, I’m going with Celestia pegging Twilight from an early age to wield the Elements and using Cadance as a spy to keep an eye on her.) There’s also the matter of her love magic, which on the surface sounds like a truly dangerous power to hold. Personally, I just saw it as magnifying romantic feelings that were already there, using the power to smooth over fights and remind ponies why they love each other. And then there’s the little issue of whether or not she’s immortal. I...have no idea, although she was younger in the flashback, so she seems to at least age normally. I also have no idea why or how she and Blueblood are related to the Princesses, although I highly doubt she is Luna’s daughter.

Anyway, the scene establishes that she’s cute and loving...which is why the next scene immediately starts raising flags. While she’s rude and inconsiderate, the big clincher (this being a kids show) is that she doesn’t know the secret hoofshake. And thus we get to the usual parade of Cadance behaving like the most horrible pony possible while only Twilight notices. Granted, she does have some good points, like when she points out that Pinkie’s party plans are more for a six-year-old than a grown wedding reception. Still, she’s actually pretty subtle with her machinations for the most part, with only Twilight realizing something’s wrong.

Luna returns for a cameo this episode, going into Canterlot to switch places with Celestia. It’s a throwaway scene, but it’s nice that the crew managed to work her in, even for a tiny role.

Twilight trying to convince her friends is where many start to call foul, especially considering what happened in “Lesson Zero.” The difference here, I feel, is the nature of the problem and how Twilight’s reacting. In LZ, she was facing a personal issue, and the solution was for her friends to take her problems seriously. Here, however, she has been acting possessive of her brother since before she even knew who the bride was. The scene when Twilight sees Cadance work her magic on Shining Armor is mostly there to solidify her suspicions, as well as provide some more foreshadowing.

And then we get to the first half’s money shot. If Twilight’s goal was to get her friends to back her up, she chose exactly the wrong way to do so. Instead of gathering proof and making calm, logical arguments about what she’s seen, she charges into the room and loudly declares Cadance to be an evil monster. Naturally, Cadance cries (thus earning the sympathy of the rest of the ponies in the room) while Twilight keeps calling her evil (thus losing her own). And then it all ties back to the first song, with Shining Armor pointing out perfectly logical arguments (both in-universe and to those watching the show) for why she’s behaving this way, mostly relating to stress from planning the wedding.

And thus we get to another “Twilight must break” scene. Shining Armor practically disowning Twilight for this would be crushing enough on its own, given how high she praised their perfect relationship. (According to the song, they didn’t have a single fight when growing up.) Her friends abandoning her again just digs the knife in deeper, especially with how utterly disgusted they look when they walk by. And to top it off, Celestia finishes her off by very angrily telling her to think about what she’s done before closing the door, leaving Twilight alone in the room. This is probably the most depressing moment of the entire episode, especially when Twilight finally realizes that she perhaps overreacted and lost everything:

I love the animation style here, but the best part is when Shining vanishes and the little Twilight looks around in a panic before crying. And then Cadance smashes the little figure, thus bringing us back into reality in time for the plot twist: she was evil the whole time. And now that Twilight is alone and will not be missed, she disposes of her by dumping her into a crystal cavern.

The cave scene is both good and bad from a writing standpoint. On the one hand, the house of mirror effect is very good, and the concept of an abandoned crystal mine underneath the city is an interesting story idea. On the other hand, why did she dump her in the same cave the real Cadance was hidden in? Naturally, she finds her, looking scruffed up, probably starving, and absolutely desperate to convince the untrusting Twilight. And then we get to the secret hoofshake again, which is adorable. This sets off the story thread for the rest of the episode.

And then we get to the second song, “This Day Aria.” This is not only the best song of the episode, it’s possibly the best of the season. There is a very definite Disney feel to the scene, and I loved how the two musical styles bounce off each other. At the same time, the song also shows Twilight and Cadance working together, advancing their development and building on their relationship for all they can with such short a timespan. And at the end, we get the zombie bridesmaids, which is a creepy enough cliffhanger.

Twilight bursts into the wedding at just the right time to be dramatic. Her friends all look upset and a little ashamed at her presence, which is a bit disconcerting given the nature of the show. And then we have the two Cadances finally appear in the same scene, as well as learn of how easily the bridesmaids were defeated. It’s a funny scene, and I liked how they didn’t reveal how the cliffhanger was resolved until after we learned they had escaped.

And then we’re introduced to Chrysalis and the Changelings. I have decidedly mixed feelings on how this was handled. On the one hand, I liked that they added an actual villain to the episode, and I love the character design of her and the Changelings. I also like how they’re not only insectoid in appearance, but also in how they behave, following a central queen, having no personality of their own, and cocooning their prey while feasting. On the other hand, such an advanced concept is slammed into the episode so late that it never gets the chance to develop properly. We learn that Shining Armor’s been brainwashed and what the Changelings are doing so quickly that it makes the scene feel like little more than a giant exposition dump. We don’t even learn Chrysalis’ name in the episode itself; we had to wait for Word of God to give us a solid answer.

Celestia throwing down and fighting Chrysalis was a long time coming, and I loved it. Of course, she ends up suffering the Worf Effect and losing, but they at least make the loss plausible. Chrysalis is visibly struggling, and is completely surprised that she won to begin with. If she didn’t have a power source nearby, she would have been reduced to a very giant splat on the castle’s window. The crown falling to the ground was a perfectly dark bit, and highlights the high stakes of the invasion.

The fight with the Changeling horde was perfectly animated, wonderfully executed, and just a blast to watch. I liked the motions the Changeling impersonating Rainbow Dash made, always moving a split second after her before finally attacking. Fluttershy tricking her own copies was amusing, as was Dash using the confusion to her advantage and saving her friend. Pinkie using Twilight as a gatling gun was hilarious. And to top it off, the freeze frames were hilarious, with Fluttershy simply cowering to knock a Changeling over and Pinkie brandishing her Party Cannon. Of course, this scene turns out to be all for naught, as the group is completely overrun right as they get to the Elements. On the one hand, it’s nice that they’re not falling back on the Elements again. (Because really, having the villain get knocked down over and over with the same weapon would only get dull.) On the other hand, it makes the preceding scene pointless. Cool, but pointless nonetheless.

Celestia cocooned was creepy (perhaps that’s how they reproduce?), and Chrysalis looking over the scene in villainous triumph and reprising the Aria was a nice bit. I also liked how she pointed out that Twilight was right the whole time, but everypony else was too caught up in their wedding planning to do anything. It’s a shame that Applejack is the only one to really apologize.

Unfortunately, we then get to another contentious scene, as Twilight frees Cadance so she can break Shining out of his brainwashing. He’s not powerful enough to create another force field, and when Cadance tries to use her love to power him up (which is totally possible...I guess), she simply brushes off the power of love and allows her flank to get kicked. Fortunately, the animation is really good here, and the Changelings being flung all over is an interesting way to deal with them. While it might seem like they’ll regroup, given the hive mind mentality they’ve shown up to this point, it’s even more likely that the hive has been shattered beyond repair thanks to the distance.

We then get another montage, showing Cadance being nice to everypony. The wedding proper is a nice touch, with Twilight and Shining Armor finally reconciling. I can’t say I’m a fan of the CMC being flower fillies, although I guess that could just be reusing major character to keep up the toy promotions. The vows are made, the crowds rejoice, and Celestia thanks Twilight for staying the course when everypony else doubted her. I guess that’ll do for an apology from her. As for Rainbow Dash pulling off a pathetically easy Rainboom, I can’t say I liked it. It feels like it cheapens just how much force you need to get the Rainboom going to begin with.

This leads to the third and last song, “Love is in Bloom.” I didn’t care for this one the first time I heard it, but after a few viewings it grew on me. It has a very pop feel to it, but otherwise, it’s good. Luna is also adorable here with her little head bang, although I can’t say I liked how she didn’t appear at all during the fight.

And so the season ends with Shining and Twilight saying goodbye, which is a touching moment all-around. Rarity pushing her way to grab the bouquet was hilariously in-character for her, given her own romantic ideals. And then the brick lands as Spike brings up the bachelor party...which he didn’t know was supposed to happen before the wedding. Oh, Spike!

CONCLUSION:

This episode has its fair share of issues, some of which can definitely be gamebreakers. It annihilates a wide amount of fanon, is very rushed towards the end, and Chrysalis is not handled in the best way. However, it also has a lot of great jokes, some good story bits, and the action scenes are very well done. I like Cadance and Shining Armor, and am glad they’ll get some more development in the third season. Overall, this is a lot of fun, and I liked it.

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And thus we’ve done all the two-part episodes. See you next time!

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another excellent episode review supported by well founded analysis and reasoning. Twilight would approve :twilightsmile:

Wow, this really was a long one. I actually skipped over several spots I wanted to chime in on and this is still a monster. I think I could probably just post up this response as its own blog post over on my page, but unless you find it overly cluttering I'll just leave it right here.

“A Canterlot Wedding” was the curveball that sent many screaming back to the bunkers. And honestly, if you looked at the premise alone and didn’t include who’s making the show and all their previous accomplishments into the equation, this would sound like a disaster.

And then some. I can still remember trying to talk down all the doomsayers by reminding them that this was still mostly the same production staff that made ponies cool in the first place.

The problem with Shining Armor, though, was that he’s not only Twilight’s BBBFF, but he’s the Captain of the Guard and her only friend from her foalhood days. This makes his sudden addition feel more than a little frustrating, and he really should have made at least a background appearance or two earlier in the season.

True but the only real opportunities to do so would have been Sweet and Elite, either escorting rarity to her room at the start (which would have lost us the awkward moment with Celestia) or by having including him in the events around Twilight's birthday (which would only have distracted form the core plot). Alternatively he could have been included in a family portrait (along with her parents) placed in the background of any episodes, though Dragon Quest would likely be best. Still, it might only have raised even more untimely questions. Regrettably the same factors that make it desirable to build him up also make it hard to introduce him subtly without hijacking a whole episode to do it, so it might be just as well that said episode be the season finale where there is so much other crazy shit going down right alongside him. Plus, the sheer shock value of the "MY BROTHER!?!" line wouldn't have been half as dramatic were he an already established character beforehand.

Twilight making the sandwich talk was hilarious.

Indeed, plus there was this little bit...

Seriously, the staff proved they were right on the ball by having Twilight basically run through every concern and criticism the brony community had been voicing about this episode. It was a simply spectacular sight to behold, and if this is the kind of attention we can expect in future episodes I find myself with very few doubts about the future of MLP:FiM. :pinkiehappy:

Of the three, this is my least favorite, but it’s still a pretty good song, and I always enjoy seeing filly Twilight being adorable.

Agreed on all counts. Though to be fair, the other two songs it was up against are both nigh impossible to outdo. Fortunately, if one divides the episode into its two parts, BBBFF has no actual competition, being the only song in pt.1

Still, no actual canon established this, so the show didn’t violate anything with her inclusion.

Agreed, it's a big ol' bomb drop on overzealous fanfic writers that hyped the royal sisters uniqueness and divinity, but relatively harmless to the legitimate canon. Also easily assuaged by labeling her a mortal/lesser/what-not alicorn, IE, that she just happens to have the rare combination of both wing and horn but is otherwise a fairly average pony.

...or at least until S3 brings in this whole Crystal Kingdom angle to potentially throw a further wrench in the works and retroactively ruin all fanon FOREVER!!! :pinkygasp:

Since Twilight had no Cutie Mark in the flashback, it would imply that either the animators made a mistake, or Twilight’s parents had some serious pull to make that work.

About that...

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Left: Friendship is Magic, Part 1 --- Right: The Cutie Mark Chronicles

Twilight appears to be living in the same home in both episodes. It is my contention the Twilight's parents have always been important Canterlot ponies, possibly lesser nobility since there son is both captain of the royal guard and was allowed to openly marry a princess (both things that under a traditional monarchy system would require him to come from a prestigious family). Plus I like how it sets up the angle that Twilight was born into exactly the lifestyle that Rarity wants, but that being the bookworm she is never makes a fuss about the fact that her parents are so wealthy.

Luna returns for a cameo this episode, going into Canterlot to switch places with Celestia. It’s a throwaway scene, but it’s nice that the crew managed to work her in, even for a tiny role.

Indeed, especially since tiny things like that would have been much appreciated back in S1. Luna never needed a plot relevant or even speaking role at the Gala, but it would have been nice if she'd at least made a token appearance if only to acknowledge the fact that yes she does still exist.

with Shining Armor pointing out perfectly logical arguments (both in-universe and to those watching the show) for why she’s behaving this way, mostly relating to stress from planning the wedding.

And thus we get to another “Twilight must break” scene.

...and then some. Seriously, call me a chump, but the twist suckered me and I thought Twilight really was overreacting to it all (I mean there was no way Hasbro would let their whole upcoming wedding line be sullied by allowing the pretty pink princess corner stone to actually be a villain). The idea that she was an imposter hadn't even entered my head yet. I figured pr.2 would be about Twilight having to fix all the bridges she just burned, most of me even thinks that would have been a better episode form an educational standpoint at least (even if what we actually got was still epic in its own right).

Then Cadance shows up to console Twilight (it wouldn't be until subsequent viewings that I noticed the little touch of her latterly smashing Twilight's dream-self). I was all set for the healing to begin, but then it all ends with eerie green hellfire and me spending the next five minutes FREAKING THE FUCK OUT!!!

On the other hand, why did she dump her in the same cave the real Cadance was hidden in?

I should think that's rather obvious. With how Chrysalis taunts and riles up Twilight I think it'd be fair to guess she was hoping to twist the knife one last time by tricking Twilight into attacking the real Cadance.

Her friends all look upset and a little ashamed at her presence, which is a bit disconcerting given the nature of the show.

Perhaps, but perfectly in keeping with how they all walked out on her in the previous episode. It was bad enough when she spoiled the rehearsal, but such behavior at the actually wedding really would be reprehensible.

We learn that Shining Armor’s been brainwashed and what the Changelings are doing so quickly that it makes the scene feel like little more than a giant exposition dump.

True, but as with Return of Harmony, I find it very hard to fault the staff for trying to (and largely succeeding at) capturing the epic scope of a classic Disney film in a mere 42 minutes. Besides, all those unresolved background details are pure gold for the fanfic community to chew over and flesh out.

On the other hand, it makes the preceding scene pointless. Cool, but pointless nonetheless.

I wouldn't go quite that far. The scene still works to firmly establish the idea that the M6 can be perfectly competent champions of the land even without their rainbow win button.

It’s a shame that Applejack is the only one to really apologize.

It would be a shame, if Twilight had actually patiently gathered evidence and built a strong case instead of going into an insanely accusatory rant (an error on her part made only all the more obvious with MotFE as the preceding episode). Seriously, I don't think her friends have any legitimate reason to be ashamed or sorry; there original responses to the scenario were all perfectly valid.

I can’t say I’m a fan of the CMC being flower fillies,

You can take that attitude strait to Tarterus! :flutterrage:

*CUTIE MARK CRUSADER FLOWER FILLIES FOREVER, YAY!!!*

...um err, yeah. I guess it's pretty obvious which product tie-in for this episode had me the most hyped. I know it's silly and that unlike the M6 as bride's mares it's never properly explained, but gosh darn it they're just so cute. :twilightsheepish:

I like Cadance and Shining Armor, and am glad they’ll get some more development in the third season.

Agreed, they could have so easily been one time only throw-away character. This show has already plenty of other such characters (Luna herself being one such prior to her return in S2). I'm hoping this shows a potential commitment to building a deeper and richer narrative in future episodes. Isolated stand-alone slice-of-life has been great, but I'd welcome some more token nods to the idea of continuity.

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Seriously, call me a chump, but the twist suckered me

Me too, I didn't notice Cadences magic being a different color either until my second viewing.

I find it very hard to fault the staff for trying to (and largely succeeding at) capturing the epic scope of a classic Disney film in a mere 42 minutes

I think they did pretty good, besides they saved all kinds of time on character introductions and development by having the characters already established by the show. In a movie that eats up at least the first half hour.


Oh and IAH I was one of those who managed to avoid ALL the spoilers for Royal Wedding minus the ads... how anyone could manage to avoid all of them is beyond me.

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...or at least until S3 brings in this whole Crystal Kingdom angle to potentially throw a further wrench in the works and retroactively ruin all fanon FOREVER!!! :pinkygasp:

So far, every jossing has resulted in good times. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png I am looking forward to more cries of "Rewrite ALL the fanon!" dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/lolface_Celestia.png
Also, October - S3.

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Spike running the bachelor party is funny, but I do have to ask who thought giving the job of setting up a night of debauchery and sin to a ten-year-old. (Really, it’s just here to throw the brick.)

We don’t even learn Chrysalis’ name in the episode itself; we had to wait for Word of God to give us a solid answer.

Of course, she [Celestia] ends up suffering the Worf Effect and losing

Somebody has been spending some time on tvtropes.org :twilightsmile:
Really you can lose a whole evening to that site, you can't just read one thing!

The Mane 6 are enjoying a nice picnic when Spike comes running up, out of breath from holding in a message from Celestia.

My interpretation of the opening is that he was out of breath simply from running to deliver the invitation, and that the second letter arriving right as he got to the picnic was a coincidence.

357843 I am also a fan of the "Twilight is from an important family/the nobility" theory. Ditto on the FREAKING THE FUCK OUT, that was mind blowing and was a lot of fun to watch in a stream.

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Oh wow, I had never seen that before, that's very interesting.

Largely I was very impressed by these two episodes. They took a Toymaker's Mandate (Is that a trope? It should be a trope.) that in the hands of a different team could have easily resulted in pointless fluff aimed purely at selling a toy set, and turned it into awesomeness.

I'm a little surprised at how well you took this last two parter, given how your last two reviews were... conflicting.

Yeah, I actually really liked this finale. I know some others were going into it with a bad attitude, but then I reminded myself that the team hasn't done me wrong so why start calling fowl now? And when it was over, I got a second round of entertainment, watching the fandom scramble at trying to make sense of it all.

Really, we are a silly bunch of ponies. :rainbowwild:

As for the new characters, I was kinda "meh" to be honest. They just weren't developed enough for me to get really invested in them. Granted, that's a lot to expect on a limited time budget, so I'm looking forward to the next season for there to be some catch-up in that regard.

A fair and level headed review! That's a :raritystarry: these days!

I don't think killing off fanon can every -real- be something to complain about, with the possible exception of something like Derpy where it's clear they've been encouraging one thing, and then suddenly do a 180. Especially since anytime development is done in a significant way, large hordes of fanon must die.

If Celestia/Luna origins are ever done, for example? No matter -what- they choose, it'll annihilate huge sections of everything else.

As for the cocoons? That's probably the single most intriguing thing to me. I always wanted to know what the person who came up with that conceived of their use being beyond temporary imprisonment.

even though i dont agree with you on this, maybe because im a 13 year old girl :duck: i dont know. but i liked the episode alot but i love reading your reviews even if my opinion isnt the same as yours i still love your opinions. YAY OTHER PEOPLES OPINIONS BESIDES MY OWN

358015 Night? Don't you mean *THE REST OF YOUR LIFE* (or at least until your computer melts or bursts into flames, at that point you restore your tabs to another device and continue)

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I once spent nearly 3 straight days there (baring breaks for food, bathroom, and the occasional nap). My computer did not explode, but I did discover that eventually my browser reached a point where it refused to open new tabs. Solution, open up a second browser to queue additional tabs in. :twilightoops:

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I'm proud of you son.

357843Don't Forget Shining was wearing his favorite uncle's chestpiece/slash badge thing from when he was Captain of the Guard.

There is a very definite Disney feel to the scene, and I loved how the two musical styles bounce off each other.

Fun fact: The bits that Chrysalis sing are in a style called a "deceptive Cadence," while the parts that Cadance sings are in a style called "true Cadence."

I don't know much about music, but that is just downright clever.

Fluttershy tricking her own copies was amusing, as was Dash using the confusion to her advantage and saving her friend.

And kissing her on the nose! AND KISSING HER ON THE NOSE! :yay:

This happened and my head-canon for it is cast out of wrought iron and reinforced titanium. It cannot be broken.

Not much else to say here, other than I wish we'd had some build-up for the changelings. A species that can shapeshift is the sort of thing that needs to be built up over time, not just thrown in.

Most of my Problems about this episode are here.. in short :ajbemused:
I even wrote 2 comments about how I think should've happened. you write about if you want.

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It would be a shame, if Twilight had actually patiently gathered evidence and built a strong case instead of going into an insanely accusatory rant (an error on her part made only all the more obvious with MotFE as the preceding episode). Seriously, I don't think her friends have any legitimate reason to be ashamed or sorry; there original responses to the scenario were all perfectly valid.

Even still, I never did like that scene. At all. I'd dare even say it's one of the most painful scenes in the whole series to watch. I can't even look at, or even think about, a single still image from that scene without getting a lump in my throat.

I can see the logic in all the characters' actions therein. I can understand why the scene played out. But I hate that it had to end up that way, with such a beloved character feeling as if she doesn't have a friend in the world when she did just five minutes ago. I hate that it got so little attention afterward. And I utterly loathe, with every fiber of my being, how the plot had to make everyone disregard the following lessons in order for it to work:

1. Never assume the worst of your friends. ("Party of One")
2. Take your friends' concerns seriously. ("Lesson Zero")
3. Always gather evidence. ("MMMMystery on the Friendship Express" which, as this review points out, came right before this one)

Yes, Twilight embarrassed her friends, brother, and mentor with her little outburst, and they acted rationally given what they knew of the situation. But in doing so, they all but ripped Twilight's heart out. A character who cherishes friendship so much, brought to the lowest of lows by believing, if only for a moment, she neither has nor deserves a friend any longer. And in the end, both sides turn out to have been merely played against each other the whole time, with much of the reason behind their behavior seeming much less solid in hindsight. One doesn't simply go through that without feeling they might, might have done something they regretted.

And for the record, yes, I did read "Post Nuptials" after watching this episode. And it was a glorious feeling. Here's looking at you, InsertAuthorHere. If you haven't reviewed, let alone read, "Post Nuptials"... DO IT.

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I won't deny that the scene is heart wrenchingly painful, but so far as I'm concerned that's what makes it one of the BEST scenes in the entire series, because it hits you right in the feels. Life can't be all sunshine and rainbows, and we need the depths of tragedy to make the peaks of joy all the more wondrous to behold.

920024 I know. Just because I hated it, that doesn't make it not good. It did a VERY good job at making me hate it.

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I'm with you, bro. "The Return of Harmony" may have also had Twilight's friends abandon her, but that was because they were mind raped by Discord and weren't their normal selves. Here, they left her on their own free will. That's pretty worse in comparison.

The look on Twilight's face after everyone she knows and loves walk out on her is too heartbreaking to watch. In fact, if I was to make a Top 10 Saddest Moments in MLP: FIM, I would definitely put this scene at #1.

InsertAuthorHere, if you read this, I have one thing to say to you: take Immblueversion's advice, go read "Post Nuptials" and give us your opinion of it. I assure you it'll give you a satisfying closure to the "Twilight gets dismissed" subplot.

1102438 Just read this little blog on the do's and don't's of writing accusation fics. InsertAuthorHere gives their brief impression of it in the comments.

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Oh, well in that case, all I can say is this:

InsertAuthorHere, please disregard my last statement in my previous post. I guess I just overlooked those comments because it wasn't an actual review of the story. My bad.

It’s a shame that Applejack is the only one to really apologize.

Well, have you ever considered that Applejack apologized on behalf of everypony for not believing Twilight? Besides, considering the amount of time it took for the preparations for the real wedding, the wedding itself, and the reception to flow through, it's quite safe to assume that they all apologized to her offscreen one by one.

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