Sep
8th
2016
TMJ : Chapter 6 Unpublished for editing · 4:41am Sep 8th, 2016
If you've read Chapter six, you may have seen that it was of inferior quality. I've reread the chapter and have decided that it does not meet my standards. I've taken it down so that it does not give my readers a poor experience, and I will not work on the next chapter until I am satisfied with the quality of the current one.
My problems with chapter six:
1. Due to the size of the chapter, Grammarly was not as thorough in its checking.
2. After reading it aloud, I've found some sentences are unappealing to the ear.
3. None of the paragraphs are indented. I have no idea what caused this.
In the next chapter, look forward to the main show and the fanfiction intersecting in the timeline. This is the beginning of Season 2.
