Something old, something new.

Oh man, I just watched the latest episode and I have to say that it's one of the best episodes on season 6 so far. I'm a huge fan of Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie and seeing them together like that in the latest episode was really amazing. I mean, it was almost like in my story for a brief moment, Fluttershy was assertive, while Pinkie Pie was totally out of her character, afraid of everything. I am writing a FlutterPie/PinkieShy story, but for some reason I haven't been able to work with it as much as I'd like to. The biggest problem is that English isn't my native language (I'm Finnish). I have been trying to get editors, but I'm not sure if the workload is too much for them; it's a long story anyway and I'm not completely satisfied with it (I mean from my part..). Of course I really appreciate all the help I have got so far, but I need more active partner(s).

I actually started to work with a new story quite a while ago. While the first story is written from 3rd person view, my new story (completely different one) is written from the first person view; from the perspective of my own character. I found it somewhat easier to write. Though I have not abandoned the first story, I'd like to hear some opinions about them both; would they even be readable without editing, and story-wise. I'd also like to have an editor(s) who's got time and patience to work with me.

Some info about my projects:
1st Story:
- A shipping between Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie.
- 3 chapters at the moment; 1st one being mostly edited, while 3rd one is still (omg still?? ) unfinished.
- There'll be no clop, only some intensive kissing time to time.
- Adventure and Romance as genres.
- Amount of chapters; No less than 5, but no more than 10.
- Long chapters: 8 000 words/chapter.

Plot in a nutshell:
Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie learn about their true feelings, but soon finds out that one of their friends is in trouble. Pinkie and Fluttershy are acting weird* as their relationship causes some rifts between their friends while they are trying to save their friend. Finally love conquers all.

*Almost as if their personalities got swapped; Pinkie being shy and scared while Fluttershy is getting assertive and outgoing.

2nd Story:
- Mature rating for an extreme violence scenes.
- An adventure of my own character, who's home town was slaughtered and he seeks a new start from Ponyville, while trying to figure out if his family is still alive or not.
- Probably even longer project than the first one (So far only 2 chapters, but this one is written with care and love (mostly)).
- Hopefully slightly shorter chapters, around 5 000 words.
- Adventure and sad as genres, possibly gore too, not sure about the romance yet, probably not.
- No clop (even if there was any romance).

Plot in a nutshell:
A pegasus finds himself on the run, badly wounded from the vicious attack against their village, and starts a new life in Ponyville, while trying to figure out what to do next. Will he risk his life by going back and searching his family and his dear sister? What more could he lose?

So, yeah.. A Finnish guy without any talent is seriously trying to craft a masterpiece right here :D I'd really appreciate your feedback about my stories, how badly I need an editor. If you want to help me with either of these projects or just wanna "rate*" them, send me a message and I'll give you the link. Even I don't know how these stories are going to end, so there might be a possibility to get a co-writer along the way I guess, if you really like the story.

*rate, as telling me if I should just kill myself now, or continue what I'm doing..

Thank you for your time.

- Shimmering Thunder