I need some help with a story · 2:44am Aug 31st, 2016
As the title says I need some help with a story I want to write. The story is about Spike becoming the hulk, I actually also have several other stories that will be set in their universe planned out as well. I have most of the story planned out but the problem is when I try to write it down as a story is seems to rigid it feels like I'm just writing so and so did this and so and so did that and it doesn't flow like a good story should. So I'm looking for someone who is interested in helping write my story so that it flows nicely (it would also hurt for someone to fix my grammar, it sucks). Any help would be greatly appreciated
If you need help editing this I could help as well