My Fluttering Heart - New Story - Needs Editors (Have Enough Now)

I have been procrastinating on getting this story done since even before the season 6 premier, but enough is enough. I finally managed to power through the last couple thousand words I didn't have finished on this story.

But it is done now, and in need of editors.

My Fluttering Heart

Slice of Life, Drama
9,768 words

After the birth of Princess Cadance's fourth child, an adorable little pegasus filly, Princess Flurry Heart wants to know why none of her brothers and sisters are alicorns.

Any help would be appreciated, including feedback on the short description.

Sorry I've been quiet these last few weeks; I've been trying to force myself to get this done. I haven't even caught up on the last few episodes since the end of the hiatus, something I plan on doing after I get this story finished.

Comments

[Level Dasher]

Hmm... if you have the story in a Google Doc and are willing to voice chat, I might be able to help. Send me a PM.

[Southpaw]

I'd be happy to help tomorrow morning once I am coffeinated (aka alive), if you like.

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[Winston]

I'd be interested in helping out as an editor / pre-reader, if you're still looking for more people.

[TuxOKC]

You can count me in!

I'm currently editing/polishing a set of five chapters for another writer, hopefully to be re-released with a sixth chapter by the 31st, but even that is not a full time job, so I'm looking for more work!