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ArtichokeLust


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  • 382 weeks
    Where art thou, oh Artichoke?

    Sorry, I'm a bit busy. I had two hobbies before I got a job. Writing here, and developing AI. I hit a wall here with the new changeling episode, but in my AI development, I found a highway.

    Look at my AI! My AI is amazing!


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  • 393 weeks
    The New Hive Super Edit

    Just letting you guys know I nearly redid the entire last chapter because of a few complaints I got. (In case re-publishing didn't work.) They were definitely valid, even if I didn't agree 100% with the reasoning behind them, and now I think my story's much better because of the changes I made.

    Keep up the constructive criticism!

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  • 395 weeks
    Testing testers

    Hello guys. Here's part of what I've been doing while I've been rewriting my main story:

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  • 400 weeks
    Would you like a collab?

    I've actually been thinking of adding some collaboration into 'The New Hive' since its inception. I can't really create a realistic representation of humanity all by myself after all.

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  • 401 weeks
    Waiting for editors to compile...

    So, my next chapter's done. Just need to wait for editors to do their thing. And from what I can see from the first editor, I made quite a few mistakes.

    Well, now I have guilt-free free time... What should I do... Hmm...

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Would you like a collab? · 9:28pm Aug 19th, 2016

I've actually been thinking of adding some collaboration into 'The New Hive' since its inception. I can't really create a realistic representation of humanity all by myself after all.

I know there are a lot of problems with collaborations, the worst being people saying, "No, that didn't happen." However, I think I've added some pretty strong safeguards for anything anyone could think of. That said, I'd much rather not have people trying to derail my story, thank you very much.

But I remember one story I collaborated in that was very enjoyable to participate in. I think its rating went up post collaboration as well. (I was the changeling!)

And one of the main things you tend to get with collaboration, which is something vital to my story, is variety. I can try hard to change my characters, but unless I go to extreme efforts, they'll start adopting my mannerisms, my ideas, etc. Heck, I can't even write about people who are into specific hobbies like martial arts, because I've never tried those hobbies.

So, there are some cons I think I can handle, and some pretty big pros to collaboration. Personally, I think I can handle it well enough, and that it'd turn out to be both fun and productive. However, I think my readers and editors should have a say before I do anything really drastic like this.



Oh yeah, Sorry about the wait for the new chapter. Some of my editors are busy dealing with real life now. It happens.

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This sounds cool. What kind of things would you like me to do if I collaborated with you?

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Well, you'd be a changeling, and you would control your character and their speech/actions/personality/background/etc. You'd also have some control of the surroundings and setting, as long as you didn't do anything too crazy.

The next chapter is going to come out first though. I mean, I already finished writing the next chapter.

Dude I'd love to be a Ling in your story. Sign me up if possible though not sure what I could bring.

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Sure thing!

So far that's 3 for, 0 against.

4159064 Ok! Well would we be able to name our changeling? Also what kind of abilities would we be able to have? We will also be able to be which class(s) of changelings? It would be nice to know.

4159221 not surpring you have written a very entertaining story that is both comedic and uet clearly bidding something g extremely dark just below the surface, how could I not want to join up?

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Yeah. They would have to have a human name though. But that doesn't mean they can't come up with a name to call themselves once they discover they're a new species for some reason.

You have the ability to walk, run, fly, and receive and modify information on whatever you're focusing on with your horn, in a 'language' you don't understand that differs proportionally with how different the concepts of what you're focusing on are. (You can transform into ponies and other four legged creatures using your horn though, but you have to know that's a possibility to be able to do it, and you wouldn't know about MLP.)

There aren't any classes of changelings in my story, just like there aren't any classes of humans, mammals, many types of insects, etc. There are only the male and female genders. You could change your appearance/abilities over months of activity though, or you could put on different clothes or transform if you want to change your appearance, if you know you can transform.

Basically, your a very strong pony-like creature that can turn on their horn and have almost anything happen, and you can look like creatures that have a similar build as you. (Anyone who would be able to figure out how to use their horn in a single day would have to be a genius. That said, if you happen to be a genius and manage to manipulate the bit-fields I give you in the right way, then you can use magic.)

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Stage fright? That's one reason. :derpytongue2:

4159295 Ok. Well when we think of a name should we also tell you what they look like in their new form with what they are going to wear? Also how are we going to RP as our changeling character? That would be something to know.

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Their new form? New clothes? You're thinking pretty far ahead.

First, for clothes, they'd need access to a reliable source or a way to make the clothes. Discord isn't reliable. For the new form, you can try, but that's going to be a real pain to work with if you want immediate results.

About the how to rp question, I'm not sure. Just rp like normal, I guess. That's like asking how to hold a conversation... Do you mean the setting? I can't tell you the setting because then I'd be spoiling the story.

You can tell me whatever you like about your character. Really sending me descriptions is just an aid to help you flesh out your character. I would enjoy descriptions, but I don't really need them right now. I was only asking if collabing was a good idea in this post.

4159592 Oh, sorry about that. Well I haven't RP before so I just wanted to know.

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No problem. I can't really answer your question though. Collabing, rp-I get, or whatever you call it, is a learned skill, like programming or speaking another language. The only way to figure out how to do it is through practice.

Did someone said martial arts!:pinkiehappy:

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I said martial arts!

Do you know about martial arts?

4161412 Damn right I know martial arts!:flutterrage:

Which kind?:rainbowhuh: There're many martial arts out there.

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...There are?

Jk. Any kind is fine. I'm a fan of Brazilian Jujitsu, since a good friend of mine took me to an initial class, where I found out I don't really have pressure points for some reason, or, I have 'deep set nerves'.

Though, if you want to collab, you can't really...

Wait, actually, yeah, you could base a character entirely off of martial arts. Forget I said anything. Praise Bruce Lee.

OK, guys, you know there's an artist group, deviant art, reddit, etc., if you want your OCs drawn, right? Or you can always take something from Derpibooru.org without asking, like I did. Pony creator avatars here are like Fl Studio default instruments to Electronic music artists; like entirely function based programs to experienced programmers; like slap fighting to martial artists; like playing a game of basketball and dribbling the ball to the wrong side...

Just saying...

4161521 (pony anatomy)When it comes to the pony body (in this case changelings, assuming they have the same joints) they are very flexible and the could basically replicate almost all human and horse movements. Before I go over the the 3 major disadvantages, I must go over the two unique features that make them adaptable. First, the shoulder sockets. Normally, their elbows in forward position like a horse, but what makes them interesting is that they could turn 180 degrees like a human can and point them elbows backwards with no problem. This is due to being no collar bone. Next part is the hoofwrist (I don't know the proper name of it) it's the most unique part of the pony anatomy. This part is near the hoof and is very much like an super flexible wrist. This allows them to grab onto objects. I'm sorry, running out out of time. See ya later.

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Hoof wrist? How they grab things?

Do you mean granular jamming?

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Oh. A normal wrist then? Don't most mammals have that?

4162285 A cat has the same flexibility in the wrist but I doubt they're grabbing objects anytime soon. Anyway, the three parts that will affect the martial arts is leg size, no fingers, and flat back legs. I don't have the time to explain it so you could figure it out

4162285 Anything else you need me to tell you.

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I don't think I know martial arts well enough to figure that out, but if you collab and describe it well enough I might learn.

As for anything else I need to know, there's not really anything. I would like to know what kind of character you'd like to use while collabing though, other than 'martial arts'. I mean, Rainbow Dash knows martial arts.

4163923 Just one question, how does someone "collaborate" on a story?:rainbowhuh:

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Well, the way I like to do it is: I write about one paragraph, then you write about one paragraph, and then we continue back and forth like that whenever our respective characters come up.

4164034 So... You make the original story and I make the character?

4164034 Sure, if you want a new changeling I could give you one. An elder who died of age and had great knowledge of (insert martial art) and had to come to face with reality as he/she deals with becoming a changeling. Is that good?:twilightblush:

4164034 Tell me when you want me to collaborate.

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