I made a few touch ups...

So we all know A Mothers Warmth, probably the most successful and most liked fic that I've written, It's a charming little story about Nyx and Twilight. But here's the thing, I actually spent the past three days making a few touch ups and refinements to the story that wasn't present before originally.

Cover art by TealessTea

Now the reason why I decided to make the touch ups is because I personally found it awkward to read out loud, I was actually in the process of doing a dramatic reading for the story when I discovered this. Yeah, I was going to record my dopey voice and put it on YouTube, but again, it was awkward to read out loud so I took it to GDocs for the first time and made some touch ups. I changed some words, rearranged small paragraphs, and added some new paragraphs into the story, if you look on the page, you may see that the word count has been buffed up a bit. It now has; 4,362 words, instead of the previous 4,062 words.

I made absolutely no changes to the story, the story is exactly the same I only made minor changes, but other than that, the story is totally unchanged, and it still has not been looked at by an editor, same as last time, no editor has taken a look at it, it's all my handiwork. I hope the story still looks good, and reads better. I also took the time to redo the paragraphs so it doesn't look like a wall, if anyone is inclined to re-read it you'll understand. I hope I haven't ruined it for anyone, it is still the same story, I have made no changes to it, no sub plots or anything, just three new paragraphs, words rearranged and changed, etc. I also got rid of the old typo's that were in there.