Well, I did it.

Hahahahahahakill me.

The Spike story I promised everyone is done. And I tried. I kinda tried. A little. He has real feelings as a character. He's a sympathetic role. He has wants, needs, a driving force, and an emotional arch where he learns a lesson in the end which will change his life.

...I may or may not have lot most of my sanity at one point while writing this. It shows.

If everyone hates this, I honestly do not care. But you know, I somehow think some of you will genuinely enjoy it. The deed is done. My penance is paid. And I have no regrets with anything I did, so...yeah. Enjoy this, mufuckas, you asked for it.

-Pencil

P.S. Better story on Saturday or Sunday.

UPDATE: This upvote downvote ratio is...so so pleasant. I can feel anger dripping off of people. It's been a while since I've had that effect on people...I'm beginning to think I missed it.

Comments

[Vylon]

Well, let's list the things you did in this story that were the requests of people:

>Spike story
>Spike gets a character
>Spike character arc
>Spike gets all the mares/harem
>Spike gets shipped with a male
>Spike death/dies of snu-snu
>Spike abuse/torture
>Gore
>Vomit
>Puns

Yep, there were lots.

Feel good about yourself.

Also, here are the requests you didn't do:

>Spike gets a happy ending
>Spike cuckolding/netorare
>Spike fucks a transportation vehicle
>Include pineapples

[anonpencil]

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... I'll go add a pineapple reference.

[Vitae]

4127557

Ohh~ who lives in a pineapple under the sea!
(Spongebob Squarepants!)

Ahem.

Hello Pencil~

[Venates]

[Devantejah]

I was expecting more Spike suffering!

:(

[Discogma]

This upvote downvote ratio is...so so pleasant. I can feel anger dripping off of people. It's been a while since I've had that effect on people...I'm beginning to think I missed it.

And this is why we love you.

[Raichu]

This upvote downvote ratio is...so so pleasant. I can feel anger dripping off of people. It's been a while since I've had that effect on people...I'm beginning to think I missed it.

I didn't think it was that bad until I saw the story. Nothing will stop me from reading it though!

[theRedBrony]

Mother of Celestia, that was awful.