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I write stories because I enjoy them. I want to do better and am willing to take any advice to improve.

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  • Monday
    Starlight's fun in the Castle Part 2

    With Spike enjoying Starlight all the time, Twilight is left to deal with all the moaning and groaning. She has nothing wrong with her brother having a marefriend, often wanting him to finally make a move on Rarity. However, taking the mare they are both living with is going a bit too far. Especially when Starlight is clearly flirting with both of them.

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  • Sunday
    New Commission and New Surprise One Shot.

    Twilight stumbles upon a kinky, literal bookworm. Nothing much else to say there. This was one of the commissions Had planned for this month. Enjoy some comedy and kinky fun. The cover was designed by heartlucy256

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  • 1 week
    Starlight's fun in the Castle

    Spike had no problem living with his busty sister. However, another busty mare who isn't related to him through raising or blood. That's too much temptation to ignore.

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  • 2 weeks
    WHY DID NO ONE FUCKING TELL ME I'M ON THE FEATURE PAGE?!?!?!?!

    I'M ON THE FUCKING FEATURE PAGE!! FOR THE FIRST TIME EVER!!

    After a solid DECADE of trending and never featuring, it happened out of nowhere!! I am on with the top dogs for the first time ever. Thank you, thank you, thank you. I love you all,

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  • 2 weeks
    Spike had the best nap ever!! Also, something else happened.

    Spike had this wonderful dream of bedding Rarity... only to wake up and find another pony with his seed instead... Awkward!

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Jul
17th
2016

The Prince has arrived. · 1:21am Jul 17th, 2016

Well I asked, and I received. Draw by Sakura. here is the main villain of Twilily Saga as a whole. The Hollow Prince....

Now on to his profile.....(I'll try not to give too many Spoilers)

So this is the Hollow Prince, he stands at six foot, five inches.(I imagine Twilight at five foot, five inches). he is wearing a green emerald suit, a sapphire tie, and yes he is blind. He is an ancient pony and has been around for a long time. When he was a foal, his mother tried to hide him from the great war that was raging. However she lost him in a fight with the advisory to the crown at the time, Redsting Blacklist. However before nearly killing his mother, Redsting was stopped by an umbra priest. He left the mare to the priest and decided to kill the child, but something made him hesitate. He didn't not know why, but he decided to adopt the child as his own.

From then on the child was known as the Hollow Prince. Granted near immortality by his adopted father. He will be making his first appearance at the end the second story(Past, Present and Damnation.). However if you pay attention, you can see his plans are playing out through the entire saga.

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Now I left out the important of who his mother is as well as who his real father is, they are majorly important. Though I didn't say their names for spoiler reasons. But I'll tell you right now. They are not the villains from the first story, so not Mother and Father.

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Side note, she said it looks a bit off because she not use to the anatomy.

Comments ( 14 )

The Prince. . . From his knees down his legs are way too short, you should make the calves shorter and change the position of the knee, that is, if he's going to be human, and or working like a humanoid. Also, for a prince, his clothing isn't very stylish, or expensive looking at all, you could've at least went with a suit instead of a jumpsuit.

4096738 It's a false title. If read the info, you see that he was given the name by his adopted father. In fact the name means fake prince.

From his knees down his legs are way too short, you should make the calves shorter and change the position of the knee, that is, if he's going to be human, and or working like a humanoid.

Telling me this is pointless, because I didn't draw him, somepony else did. Read the bottom line.

4096738 Secondly he does wear anything royal, because his real parents were of royalty, and he wishes not to represent them. This is because his true allegiance is to his adopted father.

4096788 I don't mean to be rude, but can't you at least give him a white dress shirt with a blue tie? Why would anyone ever make a green shirt with a white collar? Honestly? There's a reason you don't see men wearing colored shirts with white collars, because it doesn't make sense.

4096836 Are you reading his profile? He has on an emerald suit, and sapphire tie. I'm sorry the shine isn't there.

4096843 And his tie has a tiny knot, and if he's wearing an "emerald suit" he's wearing a jumpsuit, with the tie out instead of in, which isn't really how people tend to wear ties but whatever, I'll chalk that up to creativity (it could've looked much nicer, the suit is so basic). And what about the legs being too short below the knees? And the hand BEHIND his thigh? How?

4096876 :ajbemused: I already said that the artist is not very good with this kind anatomy. Now please stop complaining. It's my character. I chose the artist and chose what he looks like. I think he looks pretty cool.

4096906 Oh sorry, forget I said anything, I was just critiquing the artwork because that's what I do, I didn't mean to offend you, and I'm sorry.

4096960 It's okay friend, just don't push it next time.

4096972 I won't critique any drawing on your page ever again, and I'll make sure to read blogs and threads more carefully, it's obviously my mistake reading thinking that it was your art, so I'll make sure to try and re-read blogs before I go thinking something. Again, I'm sorry about that, I know I can't make it right, but, I'll learn from my mistake.

4096972 Thanks for understanding :)

4096976 I've got no problem with you critiquing me. I really don't mind criticism on me. I just got annoyed that you were critiquing me on something I didn't do. I could understand if you were critiquing my own art, but not when you were critiquing me for somepony else's work.

4097020 Of course, the messages I sent were meant to be critiques to the original artist.

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