please like my new story please

i need it to get to the future box so please give it that like!

Comments

[Try Hard]

It's bad, pls don't like it.

[Windlife]

4031316

haters like you need to leave this site. this why im voting for Hilary. more safe spaces away from people like yopiu

[Try Hard]

4031318 Excuse me, but this is a republican safe space. Git.

[Scorch215]

4031318 dude its called having an opinion and voicing it. People are allowed to do that and how you are handling people who don't lile yyour story plus this blog post male you seem like you want to world to be nothing but hugs where everything is perfect.

Hate to say it but world doesn't work that way and that is good because people being allowed d to voice their options on whether or not they like something without fear of censorship that you seem to want will just lead to ruin as no one will know what they have done wrong and thus will.have no way to improve on those aspects.

I just hope reality is kind to you when it shows up on your door step.

[Windlife]

4031343

listen here you rude hater. everything you just posted was a lie and i will not stand for trolls. I AM NOT CENCORING PEOPLE IF THEY ARE TROLLS

[Scorch215]

4031347 in what way was what I said a trolling? Id love to hear it. I gave you some helpful advice as one writer to another because deleting posts from people who simply voice their opinion about not liking something of hours is indeed censorship as you are not allowing their opinions to be heard.

[Windlife]

4031353

you are a bully using your followers to attack my new story! if you dont stop this i will have to BAN all of your followers from me storys okay?!?

if you are going to keep trolling and HATING you will have to go to my story because my fans will EAT YOU APART

[Scorch215]

4031359 I'm.doing what now?

What do mu followers have to do with anything? I litterly just found your story not even 8 minutes ago dude and haven't even said word about it to anyone and just wanted to give you some advice to help you out as a writer as I like people to succeed in their stories.

I was planing to read it as the plot sounded interesting to me and I always enjoys stories about soldiers I'm Equestria or any other part of the planet.

But of you want to ban me.and other people who haven't even seen the story then go ahead. I won'tstop yyou as it is your choice and I will respect it. But I will not respect being threatened in anyway.

So I will say good day to you sir.

[Windlife]

4031373

Man, please fix your grammar. It's a complete strain on my eyes reading your comments.

[Yoni]

Hmm, the story seemed interesting, but the way you wrote it was very confusing and hard to follow. I suggest for you to read this post. It's a writing guide meant to help writers refine their stories. I cannot stress enough how immensely helpful this guide was to me and I really think you can learn a lot from it too. Good luck /)*(\

[Xinrick]

It's not good, please stop

[Thaums]

4036439
it's really good, please continue

[Xinrick]

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[Terabyte West]

4031384 Hey, I was reading your comment, and I got an incorrect number at the same time, they told me that some user named Windlife was some kind of pot. They then said they knew because they were a kettle and he called them black.

[The Blue EM2]

4031384
That's rich!