Rewrite #2: Electric Boogaloo · 7:29am May 11th, 2016
Oh boy, Summer! Now WTR can be de-cringed.
I know I said this last time, and the time before, get off my back woman. This time I'm going for more natural storytelling with a touch of comedic narrative. Nothing heavy. The whole story is getting canned and rewritten, Adrolon's backstory will be postponed and more spread out, Fluttershy's flashback was filler (I'll admit, it was pretty smelly).
Things gon' change, now, son!