Early May 2016 check-in · 4:37pm May 1st, 2016
Sorry for the lack of updates, life has recently found a way to consistently found ways to intervene at every opportunity I had to sit down for writing so I'd been reduced to only getting a few sentences or paragraphs in at a time. However, the past two days have proven fruitful in that I've gotten a good chunk of work done and now Chapter 14.1 (clop and clop-free versions) is more or less finished and awaiting completion of 14.2, which is where all of my attention has been turned as of late. To that end the transition of scenes from the EFC Fight Nite to Luna's visit and ultimately the return trip to Canterlot has been completed, though the latter two are in various states of completion as I really wanted the encounter Lyra and Titus to come out right - I wanted the return of the bad guys from Chapter 8 to feel legitimately bad (their return was always planned) and I think I've accomplished creating some rather despicable characters as our mysterious puppet master begins moving her pieces about the board.
By this point I shouldn't need to tell you this will be a long chapter, but longer chapters means more reading for you, right? Right? Sorry, I'll try to write faster.