Doesn't this annoy you?

Is anyone else annoyed by this, or is it just me. You know, when people dislike your story but they don't tell you why? I mean, you want to know how you can improve on it! Can't do that if you don't know what's wrong in the first place...

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[Starlight Nova]

Here's what I think your evil versions of the mane six should be like:
Twilight Sparkle: Very, very, unfriendly. Hates everything, always angry. Loves fighting and thinks she's better than everyone else.
Rainbow Dash: A Bitch in Sheep's Clothing who acts like a loyal and devoted friend to everyone, but is really only loyal to herself. Have you ever read Tales of the Oppressed? Picture a cross between Janna Dell and Silent Shatter. That's what she'd be like.
Rarity: A (self-admitted) greedy, selfish, racist and pompous bitch who prefers to act first and think later.
Pinkie Pie: Acts exactly like she did during Party of None, all the time. Has all her abilities, but with a serious twist on them. The "good guy" of the six.
Fluttershy: Rough and cruel, but smart, manipulative savvy. Prefers to talk things out then fight because she enjoys getting the best of others through words. She's good at fighting though.
Applejack: monomaniacal and/or megalomaniacal, vociferous about speaking her mind with little regard for the opinions of others, and be generally unwilling to listen to reason until she's smacked hard into the consequences. Pragmatic, very smart and has no problems lying.
Will they be like that?

[The Bricklayer]

3931119 Actually, I've already written two chapters of Shattered Mirror with the dark Six in them. Twilight's Sunset Shimmer, Dash is in someways like Wind Rider and Rarity is Coco in some ways. Others just have diverged from their backstories a bit. If you read the story, you'll see what I mean.