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  • 110 weeks
    Chapter 63 Finished!

    As the title suggests Chapter 63: One Down, Five to Go is finished and will be released tomorrow. I would like to apologize for how long it had since the last two chapters. This chapter taking longer to write than the last two chapters combined. So again my apologies. I won't go into the details as to why it took so long here, I'll leave that for the footnotes of the most recent chapter, but to

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  • 120 weeks
    Chapter 62 Finished! A new short-story in the works!

    As the title suggests Chapter 62: When All Paths Converged is finished and will be released tomorrow. I hoped to have the chapter finished by the end of the year. But I just wasn't able to finish it off in time. However, I guess you can now take this as a special gift for the new year. Happy Early 2022!

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  • 125 weeks
    I'm Back! Tale of the Second Alpha is back on. For now.

    Really, I never left, I just stopped writing. Both because due to my job cutting into my time, even during Covid I still worked, and me simply no longer being interested in writing the story following what caused me to leave the fandom in the first place. Something which I won't go into here. I still don't consider myself a brony anymore, I stopped watching the show the Season 7 premiere and

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  • 312 weeks
    (Outdated!) Tale of the Second Alpha Canceled (I'm NOT Back!)

    I have officially canceled Tale of the Second Alpha. This decision was a difficult one to make, but I believe it was one that needed to be made.

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  • 318 weeks
    (Outdated!) I'm No Longer Apart Of This Community! All Stories On Hiatus Until Further Notice!

    Due to all of the bullshit that has come out about Toon Kritic (If you are not aware of his open pedophile I have made an ever blog post detailing it and my very angry opinions on the matter) and the open laziness from the entire community to do nothing more than sweep all of this bullshit under the rug and move on as if nothing had happen, and then being angry when the public continues to rip

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Apr
2nd
2016

A Brand New Trailer that I know you will like (Star Wars: The Force Awakens Teaser) Not a joke! · 1:17am Apr 2nd, 2016

I was considering actually doing an April Fools post, but I decided against it. Anyway, this trailer is based on the teaser trailer for Star Wars VII: The Force Awakens. All right go to Disney and Lucasfilm respectively.


The trailer begins with a shot of a desert with rolling hills of sand.

“There has been an awakening. Have you felt it?” The first words being spoken by a mysterious deep voice as an exhausted changeling in white armor flashes into view. The changeling without a helmet and breathing heavily.

The screen going black as the changeling stares off at the desert in front of him. The next being that of a tan and yellow ball robot with a circular design and brown decals rolling through the desert. The robot beeping along as it turns its small head toward the camera. The robot going by the name CS-8

The screen goes black with a transport carrier filled with white armored changelings carrying blasters in their green magic. The ramp to the carrier opens, the screen going black again.

The scene switches back the desert planet with an amber color unicorn with a fiery red mane hopping onto a speeder. The speeder blasting forward toward an unknown location.

The scene shifts to an image of three X-wing fighters flying over a lake on a forested planet. The far left fighter being red, the far right fight being a cornflower blue, and the one in the middle a cyan blue.

The screen goes black again. The image shifting that of a snowy forest. A black armored dragon with large wings landing on the ground.

“Chaos…” The same mysterious voice says. The dragon wiping a laser sword out of its claws. The sword being a bright red. Two thick blades extending out of the hilt of the sword which wrapped around the dragon’s claws. The screen goes black again, with the same mysterious voice, voicing over.

“And Harmony…” The voice faded out. The greatest music of all time playing as a large white dragon coming falling into view. Him flying over the desert planet.

The legendary Harmony Armor forming around his body. As the dragon continued to fly a black armored changeling flew past him. The flipped around and fire a blast of his red fire at the changeling and the camera. The screen going black. The image shifted to showing these find words.

Pony

The Elements Awaken

Wars


There you guys go. Another trailer with my characters included. I am planning on doing the actual trailer for The Force Awakens. I am just still planning everything out.

In case you are confused as to who the characters are, they are as so. Zulu is Fin, Cheese Sandwich is BB-8, Changelings are stormtroopers (no shit), Sunset Shimmer is Rey, the X-Fing pilots are Spitfire, Soarin, and Rainbow Dash respectively. Rainbow being specifically Poe, the armored black dragon is Kylo Ren (I'm not saying who specifically), and the white dragon is Theta (no shit) and Theta is Han Solo. The Millennium Falcon does exist, I just thought the scene would be cool with Theta armoring up.

I have also been considering actually writing a story with my characters and MLP's characters in the plot of The Force Awakens, but that is very unlikely. As always I am the HeroofBergen signing off.

Comments ( 9 )

I facepalmed when I read that Cheese Sandwich was BB-8. Have you read the story Piercing the Heavens by Calm Wind? In the first chapter there is a moment when Pinkie is being herself. My reaction was: Why Pinkie!?! Just why!?! There were alot of moment when I went Why (insert pony name)!?! Just why!?!

3842846 Were you facepalming because how obvious it is afterwards, or because how stupid it is that I made Cheese Sandwich into a ball robot. Pinkie might make more sense for BB-8, but I have bigger plans for her, literally.

I have actually put way more thought into the Star Wars trailer than I should have. As I have been legality considering writing a story with my characters in the plot of The Force Awakens ever since I saw the movie in December. I might do the actual trailer sometime next week or the one directly following. All of the Mane Six will be present in if I actually make a Pony Wars: The Elements Awaken story.

To answer your, no I don't think so. looks up story in question No, I haven't. I might consider reading based on your suggestion.

Ugh!... is it the fifth yet. My need for Star Wars needs to be quenched as soon as possible.

3842879 For the facepalm, it was both things. I am interested that you are a Star Wars fan. Well have fun laughing about what happens in Piercing the Heavens ok? Let me know what parts were funny for you.

3842904 I will look into the story during my off time. Question, just out of curiosity. Who do you think I have as Kylo Ren, my redesign of the lightsaber is in the design of the Halo energy sword. I can guarantee that you can't figure it out.

3842909 I am thinking either Omega or Sigma. Other then those two, I don't know.

3842959 Good guesses, and ones that I had expected, but you are wrong on both. Here's a hint Theta is Han. She is a character that hasn't even been born yet. I will leave you with that.

3842973 Do you mean Princess Furry Heart?

3842988 Nope! Just wait until the next trailer and I will revile more about the character I am having play Kylo. She does have a little pony in her, though. Stop commenting to me, I'm trolling you with information about a character that only I know exists. This is fun, but I don't want to torture you.

3842998 But I love it!

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