After getting some feedback regarding Twilight just abruptly leaving the arena in Chapter 23, I decided to extend the exchange between her and Sunset. The outcome remains the same, but now Twilight tries to talk Sunset out of engaging the attackers due to her injuries, offering to fight in her place instead. This is just a minor edit.
Nice! i like it!
I get that it's mainly just a picture but it's missing the mask.
Is cool!
It's awesome!
This is badass!
Hmmm...not too shabby. I like it.
3791922 Just fixed that.
3796445 Not bad.