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Bergen


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  • 109 weeks
    Chapter 63 Finished!

    As the title suggests Chapter 63: One Down, Five to Go is finished and will be released tomorrow. I would like to apologize for how long it had since the last two chapters. This chapter taking longer to write than the last two chapters combined. So again my apologies. I won't go into the details as to why it took so long here, I'll leave that for the footnotes of the most recent chapter, but to

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  • 120 weeks
    Chapter 62 Finished! A new short-story in the works!

    As the title suggests Chapter 62: When All Paths Converged is finished and will be released tomorrow. I hoped to have the chapter finished by the end of the year. But I just wasn't able to finish it off in time. However, I guess you can now take this as a special gift for the new year. Happy Early 2022!

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  • 124 weeks
    I'm Back! Tale of the Second Alpha is back on. For now.

    Really, I never left, I just stopped writing. Both because due to my job cutting into my time, even during Covid I still worked, and me simply no longer being interested in writing the story following what caused me to leave the fandom in the first place. Something which I won't go into here. I still don't consider myself a brony anymore, I stopped watching the show the Season 7 premiere and

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  • 311 weeks
    (Outdated!) Tale of the Second Alpha Canceled (I'm NOT Back!)

    I have officially canceled Tale of the Second Alpha. This decision was a difficult one to make, but I believe it was one that needed to be made.

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  • 317 weeks
    (Outdated!) I'm No Longer Apart Of This Community! All Stories On Hiatus Until Further Notice!

    Due to all of the bullshit that has come out about Toon Kritic (If you are not aware of his open pedophile I have made an ever blog post detailing it and my very angry opinions on the matter) and the open laziness from the entire community to do nothing more than sweep all of this bullshit under the rug and move on as if nothing had happen, and then being angry when the public continues to rip

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Mar
2nd
2016

Some Tears Might Be Shed Next Chapter · 3:41am Mar 2nd, 2016

I have been writing like a machine lately, it has been three days since my last update and I have already broken three thousand words for my next chapter. So I might be done by Friday, I know insane right.

But on a more serious note. You can read the title. I have been listening to the song Contact Redux from the Soundtrack of Season 13 of Red vs. Blue a lot this past few days, and I have to say that it has driven me into a dark place. I have also been listening to The Meta Theme, but that for unrelated reasons. Now don't be alarmed I'm perfectly fine, maybe a little depressed but that's normal based on what I am currently writing. But my writing has increased incredibly, but with that increased productivity has also come along with an increase in the darkness of my subject matter. True the next chapter contains a fight between two dragons the size of mountains, violence will be increase that's a duh. But this isn't just another fight.

I don't think I need to remind my readers that Alpha and Omega are, in fact, brothers. TWIN BROTHERS! While I have been writing the battle between Alpha and Omega, and I have had to stop writing on multiple occasions, at least three times, because I had gotten so emotional while doing so.

True these are My characters and I know them inside and out. I know their struggles far more than any reader could possibly dream to come to understand. But that's not the point. The chapter will be dark, emotional, and maybe even a little heartbreaking. I just hope that you read the chapter not seeing this has a fight between two superpowered beasts. But instead as the way I hope I will be to get it across to my readers.

This a battle between two twin brothers, one good the other evil. Alpha and Omega are intentionally supposed to be similar to Celestia and Luna. The only difference, however, is that fact that unlike the alicorn sisters. Alpha and Omega DON'T mend their relationship. They DON'T become best pals all over again. This isn't just me telling a story about dragons named after the A.I.s from Red vs. Blue for the fucks of it (pardon my language). Maybe it started out that way early on. But that was nearly a full year ago.

This is a story to show that not even the power from the Magic of Friendship can fix everything. This story is about what happens when family gets torn apart by ambition and power. Something that not even Friendship or even Love can fix. This is a story that might never even happen in the context of the show. The show could never have two characters like Alpha and Omega. And in brutal honesty, don't want the show to have a villain like Omega. Or a hero like Alpha. The show would demand that Omega would be reformed, something that is not going to happen.

I apologize if this post seems like me just ranting to myself, but just had to get my thoughts off my chest, and this was the easiest way for me to do it. And based on what I am planning later it wouldn't surprise me if I actually break down crying while writing. As always I am the HeroofBergen signing off until next time.

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Comments ( 3 )

Wow. That was emotional. I can't wait for what could be the saddest chapter that you have written. Are you going to have music for the emotional parts of this upcoming chapter? Because it will probably help the readers to understand the heavy emotions that will come in this coming chapter.

3787209 The chapter probably won't be 'sad' since no one dies. It will just be incredibly emotional and powerful for the internal thoughts that I have of Alpha about his brother. The next few chapters I think will break me. I might have a suggestion in the beginning of having my readers to listen to Contact Redux while reading as it has been such a inspiration right now. This post was used more as a way to get some really emotional things off my chest right now.

Shit, this climax is probably going to kill me.

3787254 Cool. Can't wait.

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