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Feb
29th
2016

Foal's Review Issue 1 · 6:10am Feb 29th, 2016

Well it's been over a year, but I hope you all remember my mini reviews? I did a poll, a few months back, and found that 34 of you definitely wanted me to continue them. And 29 of you could take them or leave them. considering only 70 of you did this poll... Well here we go!


Celestia's Teeth
By: Abalidoth
(No Cover Art :fluttercry:)
One of the first fics posted on this site and I gotta admit it's one which i've read several times. The idea of Celestia making herself have bad breath just cracks me up every time. If you want to read a short comedy fic, which resolves around a trollestia type Celestia? I encourage you to check this one out. Has a fantastic ending too!
Rating 10 of 10:twilightsmile:


Scratching A Diamond
By: Draco Dei
(No Cover Art :fluttercry:)
This story is a very sweet one with Celestia having been sparing with Luna not long after her return from the moon. The majority is Celestia chatting with an unnamed guard very short but one I love to read. Also Celestia is not a masochist... Just proud.
Rating 9.5 of 10:twilightsmile:


The Thousand Year Urge
By: CoastalSarv
(No Cover Art :fluttercry:)
So this one was posted before you had to have 1,000 words so this one is short. But short does not necessarily mean bad! It does have it's flaws worst of them being the word said being used far to many times for my liking. The ending was brilliant. And poor Tia this is why you put down what you are doing while having a discussion like that.
Rating 7 of 10 :twilightsmile:


Alright that's it for today. All one shots but I hope you check them out all are worth a look even if you may cringe at the trollestia bits. So until next time!

Time to get back to reading

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Comments ( 2 )

Thank you greatly for this review!

One minor thought:
I would say that when in the timeline it happens could depend on how soon after her return the individual reader thinks Luna got over her guilt for having attacked Celestia during her rebellion.

It was nice to read but sorry if I sond mean or anything like that because I don't want to sound mean or anything like that I'm just woundering when you might be posting new chapter to some of your storys like The World Beyond Her Dreams, A New Dawn, Letters, Celestia's Twilight, and last but the one I'm waitting for the most the story Mother. Again I don't want to sound mean or anything but I was just woundering. Hope you have a good day

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