Okay so i changed the name. · 5:35am Feb 24th, 2016
I hated the name An Unexpected Journey. For a space ninja, the name is a little light. It was my first story so I was at a loss for names. So along with the name change, I did the edits I mentioned also. So now the whole story is third person. So uh yeah...
That's actually a really good name! I like it!