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Roran Dreamon


I have no idea what I am doing, I write, I read and I play games, what more can a guy want while he waits for college to start again?

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  • 57 weeks
    I'm not dead, but this pandemic makes me wish 2020 would end already.

    It has been more than a year since my last update, and there is no one but myself to blame for this.

    And while this pandemic may have given me an excuse to write again, I am still going to apologize for my gross negligence.

    I would just like to say, I am sorry my fellow readers for not delivering the chapters that I have promised, but with the time given to me I will do better.

    8 comments · 250 views
  • 292 weeks
    The Crystal Wolves - THE REWRITE HAS BEGUN!

    It has been a while since I last posted something here but I have something important to say.

    I am rewriting this story to have it submitted back onto this site!
    That's right! I am reviving this story from its current form and building it from the ground up!

    Some of it might stay the same, other parts will be completely reworked!

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    19 comments · 845 views
  • 299 weeks
    Taking a general consensus

    As the title says I am taking a consensus on what you all feel about The Crystal Wolves, I wanna get a feel about what you all think about it, what you think that might need to be changed or what you wish that could be added to the story as a whole.

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    23 comments · 592 views
  • 301 weeks
    College is finally over! Let the story writing re-commence!

    As it says on the title my college courses for this year is over! I have roughly two months of free writing before having to go back to hopefully less stressful and less annoying courses where I could keep writing!

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    3 comments · 171 views
  • 339 weeks
    Warframe update = New story content

    Hello everyone and welcome to another round of my blog, today I am talking to all of you people who have been following my story Endure for an Eternity, as you all may know if you played the game Warframe on the PC on Steam, and if you do play this on Steam then you will know that it is now Update 16, which means new content.

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Feb
17th
2016

The Crystal Wolves - THE REWRITE HAS BEGUN! · 10:42pm Feb 17th, 2016

It has been a while since I last posted something here but I have something important to say.

I am rewriting this story to have it submitted back onto this site!
That's right! I am reviving this story from its current form and building it from the ground up!

Some of it might stay the same, other parts will be completely reworked!

But what will happen is that the first few chapters will be completely rewritten from what it once was!

And from some advice from one of my followers, I will make sure that this story is back to what it once was!

I will post any and all progress here!

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Comments ( 19 )

I think this is the one time I will be allowed to do this.
YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES!!!!!

Yes!!!!!!!!!

Care to tell a little bit of what's changing? Something that might be worth looking into is making things harder for your main character, seemed like EVERYTHING went his way.

3761563 Well for starters, Hard Mode will be activated for him from the start.

It will not be easy for him to rebuild the empire like I had previously done it, it will take months/years to repair the damages done let alone having to actually deal with foreign nations that will try to strong-arm him into things that he can't say no against. And also there will be chapters that will be take place of that one year time skip that I did in the beginning.

The only thing that will be a boon to him is that he will know how to everything that he does.

The thing I will be removing is the Vex Gates, that is beyond overpowered and in my defense I was feeling a bit stupid when I started to use them.

Not everything will go his way from now on.

3761694 aww, but why with the portals he could rebuild faster

3761861 he should be able to use them.

3761865 Oh, don't worry about that, just because he doesn't have a Vex Gate made out of materials at hand doesn't mean that the concept is gone. Unicorn Magic with Fallen Ingenuity can do many wonderful things.

YYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh my God I'm so glad this story is coming back. I remember when I would look at my notifications and hope there would be a update. Destiny's story is amazing and you did pretty well with some of the info only acquired by grimior cards (hope that's spelled right).

3762057 ok but in the story, all of the gear he did have and his troops where pulled from the gate including plans to build the bullet train and all of his pilkes and about anything else. and i do not see magic as being a good substitute, and now he will never be able to build his ship and celestia/the hive will win for sure D:

3762291 That's what you think. Remember, he has all of his memories which means the schematics for such things, it might not be as great as true Fallen technology being integrated into Pony technology but it can still be done. Magic can replace batteries, fuel, propulsion, and reinforcing/enchanting of metals/alloys to be strong/stronger than what the Fallen had.

All he just needs is time and resources.

3762356 ok, well maby you can make it so that some of his troops and at least one servitor are pulled with him, because the real skolos/omnegul/and 3 guardians are pulled along with the soul's of a few humans. also, remember that he could build battery acid and their is always oil underground.

IT'S BACK BABIES!!!

3762356 you know that their are no crystal unicorns or pegisi, sorry dude but the crystal empires only magical capability's are the crystal heart and the long dead crystal princess, although you could make it so that a normal unicorn strolls in. its just like how the only lunar pony's are lunar pegisi. i know its your story but im just saying for cannon sakes to the show. don't get mad at me. but like i said the crystal tribe is a earth pony race

I am not sure if I should be happy for an update, or sad because I was gonna re-read it...

3777112 thy are going to make it harder for him, what our good friend does not know is the crystal ponys are all earth ponys and he wont be able to have any magical vhelicals. im sad because he wont be able to bring any of his troops over or his servitors, and i was looking forward to him getting his ship, and you cant really turn it to hard mode because all the people their are just primitives with magic. it takes one bullet to kill any of them because the concentrated fire would be stronger than a punch from a dragon and if thy have a shield for that than it would probably be the strongest meaning that thy would win no matter what.

... I cry, but I respect ur decision! Don't fails us great Roran Dreamon-senpai!

Personally i liked the original story better, but this one is pretty okay as well.

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