Going to do a massive edit · 6:08pm Feb 16th, 2016
I plan to Edit An Unexpected Journey. I am going to turn the first 8 chapters, I believe those are the ones, into the rest of the story which is third person. I'm doing this because frankly, they suck, the dialogue jumps around here and there with says, said, and a few other things. Just want to make it match the rest of the story and it will just flow better... I think. 
On a side note, and I'm not sure if I want to do this yet or at all, but I'm starting to hate the name, so I was wondering if I should or shouldn't change it? Mainly because of two reasons, 1) this is my first story and I struggled to find a decent title, and 2) this story is about a futuristic space ninja with a very powerful suit. He fights three powerful factions in Warframe, and an Unexpected journey just seems to light for the situation. Let me know what you think?
I haven't made a decision but I'm really thinking about it.
When I make the edits, I'd like to start in a week, but I don't know yet.
