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  • 321 weeks
    Where I was the last week

    Yeah, so I was pretty much offline for a solid week, not much fic progress either.

    I was away for work unfortunately, and due to the nature of my job I don't really have access to the internet and electricity when I'm out. I mean, pics below are my daily work commute.

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  • 329 weeks
    Happy New Years (and some progress updates)

    So, to start with, Happy New Years and all that.

    Hope you all had a good Christmas and everything, I spent mine down in one of the capitol cities visiting friends. While there, I managed to get Lorenzo something hilarious...

    The MLP tabletop roleplaying game.

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  • 381 weeks
    Updates and Other Tidbits



    Happy New Year

    First on the list:

    I'm currently working on the next chapter for 'I Come From a Land Down Under', and am making decent progress. It's a bit of a difficult one and Christmas and all that. Still, pace is good, so hopefully it won't be too long away.

    Secondly:

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  • 385 weeks
    I've Never Been Proud...

    Of being a Northern Territorian until today.

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  • 393 weeks
    Spoilers for the Season Six Finale - Fic Incoming

    Hi all,

    Just a quick update letting you know (warning?) that I've spent the last six hours writing a short little first chapter (9000 words is short) of a Chrysalis versus Thorax fic that hopefully will be posted soon through the approval system.

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Jan
26th
2016

El Crystal Wolves Drama · 12:32am Jan 26th, 2016

EDIT: issue has been resolved and it's all water under the bridge. Carry on.

So, as some may have noticed, a story called Crystal Wolves was removed by the mods as it contained a large amount of plagerised material from Nigel M Chalmers: Emperor. Already the author and a number of pissed off followers have... strongly voiced their displeasure, so why not nip this in the bud?

A few brief points:

1. The mods found that the story contains a large amount of copied material from mine. As in, larger than just 'inspiration'. There were examples of this for comparison.

2. The mods are not my 'bitch'. If you break the site rules by plagurising a fic, then go and draw attention to yourself by antagonising the author of that fic, then you're just retarded. (Ps Dreamon, if you hadn't been such a direct cunt then your fic wouldn't have even been given a second glance and you would have gotten away with it. Learn from it.)

3. Other Displaced stories that took inspiration from my fic are not on a 'hit-list' that I am secretly writing. I've only had a read through of one other one, and it didn't feel the need to copy even one line from mine. As long as you don't rip specific events, characters, and text then you're fine. I honestly could care less about your fics.

4. Sperging out and lashing out at me is really a futile action. For one, it wasn't my decision and I wasn't the one who forced people to copy shit. Two, I couldn't really care less about you 'losing the most favorite fic of mine to read on this entire site' if you can't see the reason for it.

5. That Displaced fic was shit anyway, loaded with memes and the protag lusting over his gigantic double-dicks that could split ponies in half. There was so much talk about how great the MC looked, that I swear his romantic interest was in fact his bedroom mirror.

Now, onto the PMs:

My most favorite story besides Griffin the Griffin/Falling Feathers, has been taken down because of you. The Crystal Wolves is dead because of your stupidity. Why? This story is one of the best I've read on FIMFiction! Yet you decide to take it down because it resembles too much of your story? Bullshit! It only has a little part at the beginning and that's it! I don't know about the other thousand or so that loved that story deeply, but I am enraged by your selfish actions. I am literally astonished and saddened by what has transpired. And that's not it! Other will told stories are going to die because of you. I'm sorry that your work has inspired others to make stories great or even better then yours, but that doesn't give you the right to call plagiarism when their is little and to none in stories. If other famous FIMFiction writers started doing that, I bet nearly half of the stories here on FIMFiction would be turned to the recycling bin. I don't know what's your problem, but stop this before others start giving death threats at your door. Literally, at your front door.
P.S. If your going to post this PM on a Blog, make sure you put everything and not just chunks of it. And just to let you know, I'm just expressing my rage instead of doing it. I also hope you take my advice and stop this before Knighty and the others have to get involved. :ajbemused:

but stop this before others start giving death threats at your door. Literally, at your front door.

I also hope you take my advice and stop this before Knighty and the others have to get involved. :ajbemused:

1st point: Kek, come at me you sperglords.
2nd point: Yeah, go to mods. It's not like they were the ones who pulled the plug after all.

TLDR: Dude stole my shit, and then got hit. Much flames. Zero shits given.

Report Dropbear · 1,362 views · Story: Nigel M Chalmers, Emperor · #Flames #autism
Comments ( 43 )
wlam #1 · Jan 26th, 2016 · · 4 ·

The funny thing is, I actually tried reading that once. It completely sucked, even by Displaced standards. He clearly didn't copy enough of it.

I love it when people express rage at others who had nothing to do with the story being yanked.

3712192 But of course. He wouldn't blame his "most favorite story besides Griffin the Griffin/Falling Feathers..." when the author wronged is just being a prick. :) People( well most) are stupid and sometimes it makes me cringe.

It's a salt avalanche! It amazes me to no end how upset people can get at stuff like this. BTW dem tags doe

They're really blaming you for this... (le'sigh)I'd be lying if I said I was surprised.:facehoof:

It's funny, that the fools who think/thought Crystal Whatever was good refused to actually read the source material (ie, Dropbears stuff). How could they like Crystal Wolves and not like any of the adventures of Nigel M. Chalmer that were ripped off?
Some people probably shouldn't be literate in that case.

are not on a 'hit-list' that I am secretly writing

So you admit that you are in fact writing a hit-list, these fics just aren't on it?:trixieshiftright:
I don't touch displaced fics with a ten foot pole. I loved your idea, and thought of attempting something with it myself, but couldn't find a way to do it in a new, innovative way that would make it noticeable on its own merit. You know, not using the start and general storyline of "X ends up ruling by killing Sombra" without trampling over your own ideas. Thus I ended that attempt, and focused elsewhere.

Second, a call to authors everywhere. Make your OC's relatable, dipshits! Even if he's a sociopath, some of what Chalmers does makes sense. Dipshits tearing up your empire? Fuck their shit up. Not everyone looks at Chalmers and thinks, "God I want his babies." Actually, I think I'd like to read a fic about Chalmers ending up in one of Bendy's fics :pinkiecrazy:

Good stuff, preach. And thank the stars for mods...and thank the mods.

I was never aware of this like seriusly when this happened?
I mean I liked the story, and I perfectly knew about all the resemblance with yours and gotta admit there were a lot,
But the thing is that how happened, only a complain about copy/paste?. . Is still confusing; anyways I will not bitch around for a story since a lot of stories that I loved more that the Crystal Wolves were cancelled or taken down so it became something normal. Anyways,I think there could have been a better solution

I need one thing clarified, what was the author's first language?

In a number of cultures plagiarism is "ok" because of how wide spread it is in that culture, so if his readers are of the same culture base then they will find it impossible to understand how/why the author was "in the wrong".

3712313 I'm not even sure that's part of the problem. I tried reading the story once and while I noticed similarities, I couldn't get into it. He later took the chapters down and posted a single chapter saying the story was under a rewrite, but by that time I had already moved on.

I lost respect for the author after he took his anger on Dropbear. That and it was a pretty stupid move. Oh well, people learn from their mistakes....hopefully.

3712446 Eeyup:eeyup: Just waiting for someone to come back and rewrite Crystal Wolves so it won't be considered plagerism.

Site drama, disgusting.

3712471 eh, i was writing an Displaced story on Crystal Empire. Nothing like what Dropbear wrote, just a location interest (if i remember correctly, Dropbear even commented the story). Got bored with it and deleted it, because while i have many ideas, there's just not enough interest in me to finish what i start. I have started writing 7 original stories and lost interest in them within an heartbeat.

Anyway, while The Crystal Wolves was something interesting to read, it was too much of an copy of Nigel M Chalmers: Emperor. I too hope someone picks it up and makes it original, not just a plagerism.

3712490 Yeah, I hate to see interesting stories get deleated. Anyway, I also have a Displaced idea concerning the Crystal Empire, but this guy actually created it and the inhabitants consider him as a god. Imagine their reactions when the Equestrians start tearing down his statues and replacing them with statues of Celestia. He's basically Celestia's rival. Here's a hint on his power: Earth. Yes he's a video game character.

On one hand, I would like to believe that people aren't THAT retarded as to make death threats over something as insignificant and stupid as a fanfic being removed, but at the same time this community is plagued by the kind of people who WOULD be that pathetic.

It would be pretty funny to see some fat mentally deficient fedora lord awkwardly knock on your door and swing his plastic lightsaber at you though. Give them your address and set up a video camera for the greater good of the comedy world.

3712502 Eh, my story was about Mechari cosplay character (Wildstar is the game) to end up in crystal Empire BEFORE sombra took over. It was about going through the story of Mechari eventually becoming Princess Amore's assistant (While researching crystals for creation of pony Mechari army), while Sombra was still an advisor to Amore. The story would have ended when Sombra kills Amore, takes over the Crystal Empire and has Mechari happily manage his new slave empire, before Sombra is defeated and crystal Empire disappears. The sequel was planned, but i only wrote one chapter into the story described above before deleting it.

But anyway, you're story sounds interesting. And the story 'The Crystal Wolves' sounds more about story of actual wolves made out of living crystal (like timber wolves in mlp), rather than displaced story.

Damn, there goes another story I enjoyed due to plagarisim. I've got a bunch words to say, thank you for posting a blog about this so I wouldn't wonder why the story is never getting updated, and figure out at a later time. Also, if you have any of the 'plagiarized' parts, can you PM a few to me?

Dropbear you astound me and flabbergasted my mind, that is to say I stand with the True UIP writer and not these cretins who would dare hate a author for defending what's his.

So with all the rage of a thousand screaming neckbeards from the deepest bowls of 4chan and Reddit, I say have at thee ye foul plagiarists I shalt shred thy arguments in half!!!!


P.S. he's a fukin Aussie mate, he doesn't care about a sperglord's delusions.

I only care enough to chuckle at the situation and leave a comment.

3712724 I think if you read Bear's fic you'd find them all yourself.

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3712724

just to give one single example as it may help things (and I admit I do love this one as it's so bloody obvious):

Mine:

Nigel reached the base of the citadel, four long legs holding it off the ground, much like the Eiffel tower back on Terra. There were no guards or sentries to block his way as he entered via a door set into one of the tower legs, ascending the staircase he found within. He strolled through a lavish entrance hallway, the walls covered in black crystal, no sign of life present at all in the lonely rooms. He reached a large spiral staircase, the circular walkway leading upwards, towards the top of the castle. Nigel began to ascend, muttering to himself “Whoever built this should get around to inventing bloody elevators.”

Knockoff's:

By the time I reached the center of the city I stopped at the castle, it was being supported up off the ground by four struts and from what I can see each one has a set of large double doors. This castle is almost like the Eiffel Tower in France but made of crystal, looks a lot better than the Eiffel Tower and also there are no annoying tourists all over the place. There are no guards or sentinels outside or inside of the castle, it almost seems that this place is lifeless or deserted.

Just one out of the many nails.

Why would people call it the best fic on here. The thing was shit tier.

* paces his popcorn stand*
Vamos, vamos venga por sus palo-mitas!

3712951

"So says the guy with no story under his wing and no writing experience, go fuck yourself you cunt."

You didn't actually mean this did you? :fluttercry:
I mean, I know I gots no stories or even a avatar of my own but I just wanted to be unbiased. :(

I've been wanting to do a cross over meet up between Nigel from your story and Navarone from diaries of a Madman, but I have absolutely 0 idea about how that would go.

Highly recommend diaries of a madman by the way, Dropbear.

Anyway, I don't because I don't feel like i'd know the characters well enough to do the crossover justice, and I don't want to write two stories I like together in a terrible manner either.

Then I see shit like this, and realize how little shame people can have, and I feel better about realizing i'm not good enough.

So that's a plus I guess.

More drama more writing chapters! Naow! :D
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Neat

eh after being on here for 4 years already I've seen most shit like this, doesn't surprise me.

People want gold and since they can't make it they take a shit, spray paint it gold and say it's theirs

3713007

I was quoting the other guy.

This whole debacle has been immensely humorous. While I read the story that was taken down, and I enjoyed it mind, it did take quite a bit of reference from Dropbear's story.

And I can understand where you're coming from -people who also liked the story- something that you enjoyed was taken down from the site. That sucks. Truly.

But to be perfectly honest here, Dropbear had very little to do with it's removal. He noticed it, I assume either he or someone else reported it, and then it was entirely in the Mod's ball-court.

Where it was quickly taken out back and shot.:applecry:

Showing up here, specifically to bitch about it to someone who had little to do with the removal is childish.

Hold on a minute, am I reading this right or did you just get a death threat? Bad enough the guy didn't apologize to you and instead raged about this and that, but than one of his 'loyal' followers went out of their way to threaten you? (I highly doubt the author himself would approve of such actions!)

That's not right, that's not right at all.

Sorry to hear that you're getting harassed by some people for no decent reason. Hopefully this will blow over soon and people will not get so dang serious about a fanfic!

(P.S. I loved your first ending with Nigel and his friends, it really brought back those Monty Python memories and even got me to rewatch the Holy Grail. While some people wanted to see a full on slaughterfest, I liked the more lighthearted and comedic ending.)

3712520

Give them your address

GOOD LUCK.

BASED DROPBEAR ACTUALLY LIVES IN BUMFUCKING DESERT, CENTRAL AUSTRALIA.

Meh it wasn't the worst thing ever but I'll miss that story.

How's your story coming along anyway? Still writing it right?

Anyway have a good day.

3712951 I thought the similarities were there but that's just silly XD.

3713300

You know what, I would read the shit out of a story based on found footage of someone who traveled all the way to a desert in Australia,
simply to kill Dropbear, only to die cold, hungry, and alone in the outback.

And the footage/travel log was found in the bellies of koalas.

Yeah, you don't have a hit-list...really!

3713486

It'll be a Emmy award winning film. And be voted as best war story of the 21st century

never heard of this "crystal wolves" couldnt have been that good in the first place. also dropbear, you know they say that plagiarism is the sincerest form of flattery?

dunno if its true, but there ya go!

3712951

Fan fiction can't have copywrite as the stories them selves rip of characters and settings from legal owned material basically Hasbro if the felt like it can shout the site down. Also having read both yours and the better Crystal wolves this action was a load of horse apples


Also he was describing the same damn building tell me how many ways can you describe the white house?

Fan fiction can't have copywrite as the stories them selves rip of characters and settings from legal owned material

"Don’t Post (Content)

Stories that plagiarize other stories. This means intentionally copying another author’s words and presenting them as your own."

It's not a question of copyright, it's in the site rules (and is general courtesy). Sperg less.

Also having read both yours and the better Crystal wolves this action was a load of horse apples

The mods found several examples where passages had been completely ripped.

Also he was describing the same damn building tell me how many ways can you describe the white house?

By not ripping the exact description from the fic the author outright stated he was basing it off?


Still, considering you've gone and dug up this issue after it's resolved, I'm guessing you must just be a sperglord. Probably a Destiny fanboy too.

3830329 Please, do tell me what was "copied" because as far as i can tell it was only the architecture of the castle and to be honest, you never invented it. it is a landmark in my little pony owned by Hasbro and it has been shown to us a numerous amount of times depicting how it looks... other than that if their is Anythingelse that was copied... i would like to know. oh. and pls tell me, who cares if the descriptions the same. if you describe the white house their are only a few option from perfectly describing it to hinting on how it looks, show me specifically what he copied and if its only the building than their should not be a fuss, also verbally attacking will make you lose clam and make me think your just being a baby.

Please, do tell me what was "copied" because as far as i can tell it was only the architecture of the castle and to be honest, you never invented it.

1. Multiple paragraphs throughout the fic.
2. Characters who received no changes save for a rename.
3. A number of plot events that just so happened to occur at the same time.
4. Pretty much the majority of the first and second chapters.
5. A character that wasn't even renamed.
6. Enough that the mods (who were the ones to investigate the matter, mind you) promptly told Dreamon to rewrite those bits.

For comparison sakes, here's the paragraphs from both fics regarding the description of the crystal palace:

Nigel reached the base of the citadel, four long legs holding it off the ground, much like the Eiffel tower back on Terra. There were no guards or sentries to block his way as he entered via a door set into one of the tower legs, ascending the staircase he found within. He strolled through a lavish entrance hallway, the walls covered in black crystal, no sign of life present at all in the lonely rooms. He reached a large spiral staircase, the circular walkway leading upwards, towards the top of the castle. Nigel began to ascend, muttering to himself “Whoever built this should get around to inventing bloody elevators.”

By the time I reached the center of the city I stopped at the castle, it was being supported up off the ground by four struts and from what I can see each one has a set of large double doors. This castle is almost like the Eiffel Tower in France but made of crystal, looks a lot better than the Eiffel Tower and also there are no annoying tourists all over the place. There are no guards or sentinels outside or inside of the castle, it almost seems that this place is lifeless or deserted.

Notice how it is described in the same way, in the same order, with slightly different wording?

And, as a bonus:

Mine:

King Sombra was having a good day. Having escaped from the banishment that was imposed on him by those wretched Equestrian Princesses, he had returned, his Empire of slaves returning with him. It had been easy regaining control of the empire, the citizens all fleeing from his presence, hiding in their pathetic excuses for homes.

The Crystal Wolves:

For King Sombra today has been a good day, the magic that has been holding him hostage within the deepest abyss of the Crystal Empire has been weakened to the point that he was able to escape, and with his return came his precious empire also. Once he left that abyss in the ground he stormed the castle and reclaimed it along with several of the citizens that lived there, reinstating his reign of terror.

it is a landmark in my little pony owned by Hasbro and it has been shown to us a numerous amount of times depicting how it looks...

The issue was that the exact words used to describe it were used by the Crystal Wolves. That there is the issue.

I have tons more of these examples, btw.

other than that if their is Anythingelse that was copied... i would like to know.

I'll ensure to add them into the latest blog.

also verbally attacking will make you lose clam and make me think your just being a baby.

First off, lel, dat hypocrisy.

Secondly, may I remind you that you people are coming onto my blog to bring the issue back up. The only reason I even knew that it had been rewritten was because Gundam-Numpty up there decided to reopen the can.

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