Jan
23rd
2016
Just about there. · 6:53pm Jan 23rd, 2016
So, the next chapter is just about ready. Everything that needs to be written has been written, though the chapter could do with some heavy editing.
It's a bit more on the slow side, and has quite a bit of exposition, but I really felt that, after the action packed chapters before it, we kind of needed one of these. At any rate, I'm going to bed, cause I have a date tonight! If you guys want to read the next chapter, be my wingmen and do some editing and proofreading while I'm away, than that makes you doubly awesome! I'll get to it myself tonight as soon as I've had a chance to catch my breath.
You can find it here.
Yes, some exposition was necessary.
You already posted it, but I went ahead and left some notes on the gDoc anyway. I noticed a few things when I read through on FIMFic, so I reread it on the gDoc to mark them. However, I only got through up to the last segment with Alex. I couldn't read any more due to needing sleep so I can function at work tomorrow.