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Hello bronies and pega-sisters! Hope you all had a happy day!

So as you all know, I make spelling errors from time to time....to time......to time.....to time to time...

The thing is, I really need an editor, or a proof reader or anybody that just tells me the errors so I correct them.

I'm going to be needing one for Grandchildren of Discordand A very Screwy pregnancy. Or just one for both.

Also, I need a cover art for A very Screwy pregnancy. Please help me, thanks! Your friend pega-sister,

-RH

-Read,Write,Draw!

Comments

[rainbowdarth]

There are issues that I didn't get to but here are a few minor things...

" Besides, it's just 9 in thenine at night." Screwball said turning to her husband. her head was now on his chest. Mothball hugged her tight.

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" M-hmmm"

" MOTHBALL WAKE UP!"

"Gah!!" Mothball stood up in the bed with his eyes opened after his wife screamed in his ear.

" What happened?" He said rubbing his eyes. Screwball just shrugged.

" Dunno. I was feeling lonely." She said with an innocent smile. Mothball groaned as he laid down again and put a pillow on his face. Screwball giggled and laid by his side. She hugged him and moved a little bit the pillow so she could see his mouth.

" Well.... I was thinking. Maybe you and I could go for some weeks to Crystal Empire.. after all, Heart's Warming Eve is in 3three days and I was thinking on doing something only you and I." She said snuggling close to him and putting her head on his chest. Mothball smiled.

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" Well, it sure felt like an hour."

" I hope you can make it. And I know we are giving the invitations early, since it's in 6six months." Dinky said then rolling her eyes.

" Oh don't worry! It's always nice to give the invitations early!" Screwball said with a smile. Dinky nodded.

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" Sooo pretty!!" Screwball walked out of the train admiring the Empire. She walked closer and groaned.

" What's taking so long?" She said looking back and seeing her husband barely getting out of the train. He had five bags on top of him and one in his mouth.

"W-why did you pack s-so much!?" He said walking slowly to his wife. Screwball just shrugged. She took 2two bags with her magic, making Mothball sigh.

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" Oh no no. We will pay it." Cadance said. Shining nodded, and Mothball shook her head.

" Uh uh. We will pay it. You already done too much." ScrewallScrewball said. Cadance was about to protest but her daughter came running.

" They said no problem! And since its for the daughter of chaos, they will give it to them for free! The time they need it!" Flutterby Lily said excited.

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Screwball and Mothball entered their temporally house. They both put the bags on the floor and gave the house one good look. They both gaped at it's beauty. It had two floors, the living room was huge and so was the sofa. They had a TV in the wall and a lot of decorative plants. They moved to see the kitchen. It was huge as well. It had one table for 8 ponies and a lot of decorative things too. They moved to the bathroom. It had a shower and a Jacuzzi. They smiled at the decorative things AGAIN. They went upstairs. It was mostly rooms. 3three rooms, and 2two bathrooms upstairs. They entered one of the rooms. It was all turquoise. But rather girly. That was clearly Flutterby Lily's friend.

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Mothball ran to the door and downstairs. He didn't see his wife so he ran to the door that led to the backyard. By the door's side was a little wooden table with a flower vase, well there WAS a flower vase. He saw his wife floating on top of the broken glass with a scared expression. Mothball sighed in relief. Screwball slowly went back to the ground and shut down her magic.

" Screwy, please be careful. Now we have to pay that. Not only that,youthat, you could have gotten majorly hurt." He said going to his wife and helping her so she wouldn't step on the glass. Screwball smiled awkwardly.

" I know. I know. I will listen to you next time." She said giving him a kiss on the cheek and using her magic to clean the glass and put a new vase on the table. She ran outside.

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Wish you luck on your journey.

[Mystic Shadow]

I could be ur editir if u wan :P ugh i cant type coz im on my phoneeee anyway i uaually get 10/10 in grammar lol STUPID BIG FIBGERZ

[MLPRainbowHeart]

3696858 Thank you! I really needed help! Stayed tune for an update.

[MLPRainbowHeart]

3697841 Ahaha okay. You can do it if you wish. Wish story do you prefer? Grandchildren of Discord, or a very Screwy pregnancy?

[Mystic Shadow]

3698277

I dont really mind which, i could do both if u wan

[MLPRainbowHeart]

3696858 Hey, so are you my editor for A very Screwy Pregnancy? If so, tell me. If not, still tell me :P

3698479 Okay, well I THINK I already have an editor for A Very Screwy Pregnancy. You can be the editor for Grandchildren of Discord. Okay so, so how do we do it? Lol..

[rainbowdarth]

3698578
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I did kind of leave that part open ended, didn't I?

If you wish me to be your editor then I will.

[Mystic Shadow]

3698578
Oh okay, first do you have a password for your story??

[MLPRainbowHeart]

3698656 Well yeah! Then it's settled you will be my new editor for a very Screwy pregnancy.

[MLPRainbowHeart]

3698665 No

[Mystic Shadow]

3698670

Ok go onto your story and click on edit and then scroll down to basic info and type in a password inside 'unpublished view password' then save it. Once you did that, send me the password in a private message by clicking on my user and going to messages then I can do it from there

[MLPRainbowHeart]

3698687 Mk :3 but remember, don't change the story, just the errors. Thanks again!

[MLPRainbowHeart]

3698687 Done! By the way, that won't block view from the story or anything right?

[Mystic Shadow]

3698701

Of course it wont! Plus I wont change the story, only the errors! Totally omg sorry if i do! It might be properly done after I come back from school cause here its 11 so yh (probably not all chapters but yeh)

[MLPRainbowHeart]

3698710 Okay ! Don't worry about doing ALL the chapters.

[rainbowdarth]

3698669 I look forward to it.
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