Sirens Song (Work in Progress) · 12:56pm Jan 18th, 2016
[Female Vocalist] Ahhhh [Drawn out notes] (x4)
When oceans part and lands crumble into nothing
will you remember the day I took your hand in mine
As we walked hand in hand we lost track of time
Darling i wan't you to always be mine.
[Female Vocalist] Ahhhh [Drawn out notes] (x4)
Like a flame we conquered everything in our path
when days bled into nights i promised i would always be by your side
Now i sit here in the ruins of before wandering what went wrong.
[Soft Piano Interlude]
[Female Vocalist] Whoa yeah [Drawn out notes] (x4)
[Guitar kicks up accompanied by double bass drum beat [Constant Flow]
Now my world burns slowly
memories of what we had
just embers in the ash of the memories
{Screaming] All I wan't to do is hear your voice
but then my mind blacks out and once again
I'm lost in the sounds of your siren song.
So take these bridges burn them down turn the seas into everlasting memories
nothing can ever take us back to the times when we were together
So now i thrust this jagged knife into my chest and again i scream
{Screaming] All I wan't to do is hear your voice
but then my mind blacks out and once again
I'm lost in the sounds of your siren song. (x2)
[Soft Piano]
All I want to do is hear your siren song one last time yeah eh yeah (x2)
that familiar sonata from the times when nothing really matter at all
yeah eh yeah (x2)
[Screaming]
Now all i want to do is burn this world to the ground
my life is empty without your existence flesh and blood scab over
buildings and bridges crumbling like the life you left me with
i just wish that this would end
[Two people singing Male and Female]
baby I've been gone for far to long
you've been gone for so long
i left you with no words or goodbyes
not even a single goodbye
[Female Vocalist]
But now after the pain and tears
all the suffering and blood
I'm back to rebuild that perfect Aria we created so long ago
that familiar sonata that drew me to you.
[Both Vocalists]
So take these bridges burn them down turn the seas into everlasting memories
nothing can ever take us back to the times when we were together
So now i thrust this jagged knife into my chest and again i scream (x2)
{Screaming] All I wan't to do is hear your voice
but then my mind blacks out and once again
I'm lost in the sounds of your siren song. (x2)
Finally were here one final burning sonata of love
so my dear lets join hands once more and watch the world burn before us
So take these bridges burn them down turn the seas into everlasting memories
nothing can ever take us back to the times when we were together
So now i thrust this jagged knife into my chest and again i scream (x2)
{Screaming] All I wan't to do is hear your voice
but then my mind blacks out and once again
I'm lost in the sounds of your siren song. (x2)
Wow, nice!
ya i still feel like it needs work, cause its a breaking Benjamin type song about a character (me) who fell in love with Adagio but becam depressed after her exile. the female vocalist is meant to be dagi sing to him
(me) from equestria
3694899
Maybe a little, but it's definitely on it's way!
Can you...make music though?
3694902 no
just lyrics. I can kinda sing but not very well.
3694905
Hm...
Well, let me know when you have the lyrics complete! I can't wait!
Psst. I can sing if you need me.
3694907 ill keep that in mind. Cause i do need someone whi can somewhat imitate Dagis singing voice.
3694923
I...was about to mention I won't be very good at Adagio, but I might be able to get someone who can, it depends on whether they're up to it or not. We'll see.
3694924 if cant find anyone then you got the job. I also need to think of a bridge and chorus...Adagio could have the bridge and the two could be the chorus. "Play the sirens song so that i may find my way back into your arms" hmmmm
3694927
Okay, I'll try my best then.
3694927
Of course, I really don't know what you're going to do about the music
3694950 i might download a few music making programs and see if i cant enginer a audio track then meld the voices into it.
3694950 or i could find someone to do that for me.
3694960
Okay
But for now, you should focus on the lyrics
3694989 my thoughts exactly. No need to rush
3694961
I could take a whack at making something, though it would only be on guitar for now. Is that alright with you?
3695206 sure its a start
3695931
Awesome! I've actually got a tiny little something cooking right now. Is there a preferred way I should send it to you?
3695958 if ya wa t email it to me at toxicponygaming@gmail.com
3696424
Alright, cool.
So now, unless my email lied to me, you should very soon have my incredibad really rough version of your song. Hope you can find at least one thing to enjoy.
3697054 sweet
3697112
So you've got it then?
3697054 DUDE OMG THATS FUCKING AMAZING. THE RYHEME YOUR VOICE IT SOUNDS EPIC. THANK YOU SO SO MUCH DUDE.
3697120 got it and saved it to my phone. You sir have an amazing talent. This conveys the emotion in the song. Cause the background of the song is me and Adagio being worlds apart but this beautiful song you've made has made it so much more powerful. Thank you
3697123 3697133
Thank you very, very much for the incredibly kind words - they mean a whole lot to me
! I am also ultra happy to hear that you like it. However, if you would like, I could always re-record it so you could have a higher quality copy, maybe even get the whole song in one recording if everything decides to work with me. Actually, I may just record it again just to get you a better quality version, because the one I sent you is pretty grating to me.
Anyway, if you've ever got other musical stuff going on, I would love to toss in some help if you need it. Thanks again!
3697161 Dude you will be the first one i come to when i write another song. And I'd apreciate the higher quality version but only if its comfortable for you. If its to much trouble i can keep the version you emailed me.
3697167
Awesome! And, no, I have absolutely no problems with making you a better quality version - in fact, I'd prefer it if you had a better one than what you have now.
3697179 ok well thank you. Also i have two other songs planned but i understand hiw tasking this is so I'm gonna spend time perfecting the next song.
3697197
Sounds cool. Just send whatever you want whenever you feel like it.
3697202 sweet. Thanks again so much