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TheFimFicCritic


From the state of Ohio. I am 25 and a certified S.C.U.B.A Diver. I enjoy writing poetry and have intentions only to give support to writers and hope they will support me

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  • 328 weeks
    The drive is back!

    Well... I have to say I am glad to have my drive for writing back. The stress of 2017 was a HUGE killer for me. As you are no doubt aware, this is me announcing that my year long hiatus from writing is over. Screw 2017. I'm not sure what changed, all I know is I got home from work and started writing, next thing I know 40 minutes in and I'm at 1,257 words for my next chapter. Expect an extra long

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  • 349 weeks
    Sorry for the time between chapters.

    The start of my 2017 wasn't great... My Great Aunt passed away... Then a month later I had another family member pass away. Then after that another month went by and my Great Uncle passed away... I took that pretty hard. Him and I were close... Two months later my Grandmother passed away. I went down to her house and arrived literally 10 minutes before she died. I couldn't watch. But once my

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  • 377 weeks
    I Wrote A Thing... Not Pony Related But Shantae Related.

    You sit back on the deck of your house in beautiful Scuttle Town, feeling the sun’s rays on your skin. Eyes closed, hands behind your head, just taking it easy.

    “Bolo! Oh where did that boy go?”

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  • 382 weeks
    Wow... Over 100 followers.

    I never expected that to happen. Im glad so many of you enjoy cuddling is the best remedy so much to follow me. Even though I hardly do anything with blogs. Other than to update you guys on when you can expect the next chapter.

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  • 389 weeks
    I should have chapter 10 of cuddling is best remedy by the end of November.

    Now I am sorry from the long hiatus from writing. But I should have something by the end of November. Cuddling is the best remedy is not dead everyone, I promise. Life has been getting in the way. So now I am ready to dust off my keyboard and give some ideas I have a try.

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Dec
23rd
2015

A New Story... Maybe. · 12:57am Dec 23rd, 2015

So A Good Friend Of Mine Asked Me To Do Something With Sunset Shimmer. Here It Is In All It's Un-Edited Glory!!!


"PIZZA EATING CONTEST GO!" Sunset Gives You A Small Smile.

"I'm Gonna Sit This One Out" She Thinks Crossing Her Arms. Sure Enough Five Minutes Later You Are Laying On The Couch In A Fetal Position.

"Ouch.. I Ate Too Much Of The Pizza... Oh It Hurts, It Hurts Real Bad." Sunset Giggles And Rubs Your Stomach.

"I Knew This Was Going To Happen You Big Goof."

"Yeah Well You Married This Goof" She Pats Your Stomach Gently.

"Yeah I Did." She Says With A Light Giggle.

"Can You Walk Up The Steps, Or Do You Need Me To Carry You?" She Asks.

"Carry Me Please!" You Say Excitedly.

She Giggles And You Smile.

"Well bad news, I am not gonna carry you, but I will help you walk."

"BUT I WANNA BE CARRIED!" You shout like a kid not getting a toy at the store.

Sunset Just Stares As You Continue To Have A Fake Temper Tantrum. "You Done?" She Asks.

"Not Yet." You Say. She Reaches For Your Hand And Pulls You Up And You Kiss Her Cheek.

"Come On Let's Get You Up Stairs. No Sex Tonight."

"Aww. But How Else Will I Show You Just How Much I Love You?"

You Both Smile At Each Other And Kiss. Her Velvety Soft Lips Caressing Your Own In A Tender Display Of Passion And Love. Sunset Breaks The Kiss And Begins Walking Towards The Bedroom With You.

"You Weren't Serious About Being Disappointed About No Sex Tonight Right?" She Asks.

"Of Course Not Love. I Think Kissing And Cuddling Are Two Perfectly Good Ways To Show My Love To You." The Smile You Get Warms Your Heart.

Carefully You Climb The Stairs With Sunset Shimmers Help. Reaching The Top She Helps You To The Room And Lays You On The Bed. She Turns On The Light And Smiles Seductively At You As She Removes Her Top. Her Pink Lacey Bra Making Your Eyes Nearly Pop Out Of Your Skull. She Takes Off Her Belt And Turns Around Bringing Her Legs Close Together As She Takes Off Her Pants, Slowly Revealing The Soft Skin Of Her Butt To You. Her Pink Panties Making Your Member Stiffen. She Turns Around And Sways Her Hips.

"Figured You Would Like A Show Since We Are Not Having Sex." You Chuckle.

"Just Get In The Bed And Cuddle With Me." You Say.

She Giggles And Shakes Her Butt One Last Time For You And Walks Over And Opens The Sheets And Lays Down Beside You.

"I am such a tease." She Says.

"I noticed."

"I may see you naked on a regular basis, but each time you undress in front of me I can't help but feel like I am seeing you for the first time."

She giggles and wraps her arms around you, nestling her head into your neck. Then Sunset gets an idea. Letting go of you, she flips over and grinds her butt into your crotch, making your eyes widen.

"You Seem To Be Enjoying This." she says breathlessly. You put your hands on her hips and push her away. She giggles and flips over to hold you once more.

"Are You Done Teasing Me?" you ask annoyed.

" I Am Now." she says.

"Good. Can We Please Sleep? My Stomach Hurts From All The Pizza And I Just Want To Sleep This Pain Away." Sunset kisses your forehead and snuggles up to you. You smile and close your eyes, letting the warmth of sunset shimmers body relax you and lull you to sleep. Waking up the next morning you look down at her sleeping for. You smile and brush her hair away from her face and plant a kiss on her forehead. This action earns you a content sigh. Smiling, you rub Sunset Shimmer’s back.


So Tell Me What You Think.

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